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for Breaking Sasuke *Completed*

by megladon129

person Mimi
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story was really great by itself, but I have to admit I'm a little disappointed that there wasn't any 'action' if you know what I mean. It kinda seems incomplete. Where's the Smuuuuuuuuut?! All in all I give this two thumbs up, but consider a sequal. *puppy dog eyes*
person Itachi
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love this story!
person Amayou
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. How the hell do you do it? That was so powerful... my heart was doing things I never knew it could do. Your storytelling is amazing. The way the characters come to life and stay in character... insanely perfect. I love this. I didn't want it to end! Through the whole last chapter my eye was darting over to the scroll bar.. and my mind was dreading every moment it got closer to the end. The question marks stampeding through naruto's head, I was laughing so hard. And when sasuke thought he was rejected near the end, omg I thought so too, and I was like "noooouu!! Naruto how could you?" and then when he gave sasuke that "try that again" line...... xD I felt like dancing! Thank you for writing this. You made me so happy.
person Asa ReMe
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
umm, the title sounded a bit like Chasing Naruto's title, but still this is a really good story, I enjoyed reading it. Oh, and update Chasing Naruto. Thankies, ja ne.
person XaloneXalwaysX
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my-- holy shit. I love you. I loved your fic. I CRIED yo. For real...because of how you described everything...the way Sasuke was feeling...the dialogue. It was all so great and I cried at the sad! So awesome.
10/10!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person kuroi-sakurapetals
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kuoo!! that was so sweet that i think my teeth have all fallen out!! >o
person shimomizu
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woaaah a sweet shounen-ai fic for a day which doesn't labeled as 'yaoi +17' was refreashing~
nice 1 & thank for the story
reading ur other fic too ;'chasing naruto' ^^
person fnw
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have no idea what just happened. Oh my gosh. I was reading "Glad to hear it." and then, with my iPod in my ears, the song "Pretty Boy" by M2M came on. A song that I haven't listened to in AGES. And the first opening strains of the song was like a movie unfolding in my mind - I could see Sasuke and Naruto's hands, their expressions, the light of the fireworks - you know, like how music begins in a poignant part of the conclusion of a movie? It was so sweet.

"Oh my pretty pretty boy I love you
like I never ever loved no one before you
Pretty pretty boy all mine
Just tell me you love me too...
Oh my pretty pretty boy I need you
Oh my pretty pretty boy I do
Let me inside
Make me stay
Right beside you..."

This story was so sweet. It's nice to see a good NaruSasu once in a while, where Sasuke is just so totally in love with the blonde ('cause man, you know he is). If anything, please write more NaruSasu or SasuNaru...I'm not picky ^__^

Great job!
person Shawver
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my, its so cute! i litterally squeaked when i read that ending, an occurance which is rare for me (the squeaking, that is). what a wonderful fic! well done ^__^
person ladygizarme
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwww...*tears* it's over... that was *sooooo sweeeeet* *sigh* even if it was just s-ai in the end, it was sweet and i loved it... as i love everything you write :p i especially loved all of sasuke's internal thoughts.. you write him so well!! keep it up ^__~