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for Breaking Sasuke *Completed*

by megladon129

person PlotLemmingCaptive
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi again mother! ^^.... WAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII! that story was awesome! especially that last chapter was so well written. i thought i was gonna cry when naruto pushed sasuke away, and then was gonna take the kitty away too... then naruto's line came and i swear i was cheering. i kept sending bits over IM to my twin... and she got so engrossed in it, that when i took a break to read more for myself, she kept poking me for more of it. heehee, yet another person i've sent the link for your story to ^.^ seriously though, the pacing and timing of everything was great, not to mention the humor... oh gosh, poor poor sasuke ^v^, but it is so much fun to torment him. good thing i wasn't in the dorm when i read the end of that story, you'd have to call in the cleaning crew to wipe up the puddle i melted into XD
person eyes0nme19
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the best naruto/sasuke romance story ever ....and such a sweet ending too!...I love it!!
person kellyuna
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waaai i really loved ur fic! some parts were so funny. loved the lap dance :p and the way u descriped their emotions. to bad it didnt go further ;)
person harukakatana
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was adorably cute. =p Now, where's the sex?


Kidding. This was actually one of the only fics I don't hate because there wasn't sex. In fact, I'm glad you didn't just rush into sex or anything. Although, maybe a nice little written OVA would be fitting, hmm? =pp
person demonesse
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*mind makes the mental connection* hey! you're writing that other sasunaru fic too!! chasing naruto? *is frequently slow like that*

love 'em both. bashful sasuke works. this is a really sweet fic. is it near its end already??? *aww* but i totally liked it. heh. drunk sasuke! *wants one of those too!*

and somehow, when i think about the cat that naruto wins for sasuke.. all i see emily the strange's lil kitty. hmm.

*much love for your fics*
person Sozoku
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-_- .....That was so....sweet!!! ^-^ I just love the ending line! At first I thought I was going to cry when Naruto took away the cat, but I became so happy when he wanted to kiss with the toy! Ohh how sweet! *Squeals* You're such a great writer. I could actually feel the emotions Sasuke felt along with Naruto.
person coriander
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwww, that was sweet!! And I loved how you went about this. I love how Naruto didn't just 'suddenly' realize that we was in love and all that crap. I mean, yea he probably does, but he wasn't just like, yeah! lets jump into a relationship eventhough I just found out u like me. I don't know, I'm babbling. But it was great fun. It was super cute how they were flirting and stuff. I think u should have a couple more chapters of the courtship and then a mutual declaration of love. that would be sweet. ^_^
person Demon
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!!!!!!! oh please let them get together! *sighs and passes out*
person MindGames5150
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH Kawia!!! That was so cute! Well, I'm satisfied with how things are going for now. For now. I'm hoping for their relationship to go further in the near future, very near. I can't wait to read the next chapter so update soon, Ja!
person macy
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
howaaaaaaaaa!!!!! that was sooooooooo cute >_