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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gyaa...my review got cute off because of the brackets, ahehehe ^^;; ahhh...i was just raving about how awesome your fic was.... and was pleading with quivering lips for an epilogue where Naruto officially gives Sasuke an answer. well anyhow, i loooooved this fic. couldn't stop smiling. thanks for writing it! ^^
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoah! That was great! Humour, anxiety, love... I felt it all! I feel you, friend! Good work!
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
unique. both characters are well characterized, and the story doesn't seem cliched at all. i really wasn't expecting it to end that way (very believable) and it's quite funny seeing sasuke in the predicament. i think you captured both of their personalities perfectly. kiba's amusing too, for his wise words... heh heh heh. and i really like how you highlighted the complex nature of the relationship that naruto and sasuke shares.
i'm looking forward to reading more of your work in the future.
i'm looking forward to reading more of your work in the future.
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!
That's so cute!!! Awesome story. Sasuke's characterization, besides all the blushing, was right on spot, and so was Naruto's happy obliviousness! I LOVED IT!!
That's so cute!!! Awesome story. Sasuke's characterization, besides all the blushing, was right on spot, and so was Naruto's happy obliviousness! I LOVED IT!!
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the fluffiness of this fic. well, i like it. i guess this is the end ne? the ending was great. good job.
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wahhhh theres no more. It was good though. Very cute! You should write more stories ^_^
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is soooooo good, i really really like your story. i love it when it's sasuke who's in love and he has to work to get naruto, you've really writen the characters in a great way. And that lap dance naruto gave sasuke was to die for!!!!! please continue to update as soon as possible!
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story left me enraptured..
I've never read a naru-sasu in which sasuke was the one with the "problem"! :D It's definately
a wonderful and welcome change. I love the slight AU, as well as the hina/kiba touch you added!
The lap dance was a hilarious scene that left me giggling for quite some time.
Great writing and story! I can't wait to read more! ^^
~michi~
I've never read a naru-sasu in which sasuke was the one with the "problem"! :D It's definately
a wonderful and welcome change. I love the slight AU, as well as the hina/kiba touch you added!
The lap dance was a hilarious scene that left me giggling for quite some time.
Great writing and story! I can't wait to read more! ^^
~michi~
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O ... so SWEET!!!!
i love this thing!...it's a short, neatly concise little shonen-ai fic., and the ending was superb and believable. wah, you really made me feel so sweetly & sappily happy at the end. you also made me hate naruto's little guts for a moment there...wow, i dont believe ive ever felt a negative feeling towards naru-kun until now...good thing naru turned out to be a sweetie
i love this thing!...it's a short, neatly concise little shonen-ai fic., and the ending was superb and believable. wah, you really made me feel so sweetly & sappily happy at the end. you also made me hate naruto's little guts for a moment there...wow, i dont believe ive ever felt a negative feeling towards naru-kun until now...good thing naru turned out to be a sweetie
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aaah, the cute! It burns!
I love this. So much humour, so adorable, and a few sexy parts. =] My only complaint is the use of the "l" word, but that's just a peeve of mine--other than that, this story was awesome.
~Sam
I love this. So much humour, so adorable, and a few sexy parts. =] My only complaint is the use of the "l" word, but that's just a peeve of mine--other than that, this story was awesome.
~Sam