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for Breaking Sasuke *Completed*

by megladon129

person Kashi
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe... I love how sasuke is so confused... the perfect amount of angst!
person Chiyu
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omigosh *clings* I love you XD Hehe. Now every time I hear that song I'm going to picture Naruto dancing around in his boxers and Sasuke staring at him, mortified. Awesome XD I love how...true to the characters you wrote this, I guess you could say. And how Naruto isn't ok with it all right now. It makes it more realistic I think. Poor Sasuke. He thought Naruto knew. *snickers*
person rainbird
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very cute! Well written too. Me wants more ^_^
person shibby lil chibi
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooo, awesomeness!!! write more write more write more!!!! gar!!! sorry.... it's like 2.30 am.... i am very sleepy and waay out of it..... but very nice fic... the lap dance was funny.
person Erika
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting,...so Naruto really had no idea what was bugging Sasuke...well now he knows...LOL..t.hat was GREAT:D THANKS
person Anon
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*DIES* OMG, the striptease was hilarious. You chose the perfect song!
person m
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot scene. o.o
person Fan
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really fun!!! Can't wait for more! Yay!
person Demon
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh wow i loved the lap dance!!! and with the whole song bit and the strip tease. please write more soon!
person kenshinjunkie03 (too lazy to log in)
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! i hope you plan on finishing this story. i would have to call on my impending death of doom clouds on you^_^V