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Ummm,guys do not feel sexual impulses in their tummys,girls do,there sexual responce is very limited,thier sexual organs,unlike women.I have seen that in alot of fics lately(the feeling sexual pleasure in their gutsJ just as long as you know its not true.odd however,where did that idea come from?.There is no such thing as a non pleasurable orgasm,esp. for guys,they do not have a variety of different orgasms like girls do(and are they jealous)so they are all good.I mean he was hard for so long he hurts,its not gonna be a bad come but I get your point.This is a really good Sasuke.His thoughts seem very I.C.I like him alot.He is very clear and crisp not in denial the way he is written alot.He knows himself here.Cool.Yup,yup.Tank yuuu.More,more?

I love your work.
Keep it up!!!

yeeesssss!!!! i love kakashi and sasuke fics!!! there needs to be more!! yaaay! hurry up with your next update!!!! i'l be waiting!

This is a really interesting Sasuke.I like the fact he is so unapaligetic.The tango was reasonable and the whole thing seems more IC than most to me,alot of stories really over do it esp. Sakura and Naruto.I really like this.You have a good "voice" in Sasuke's POV.Thank you.

adjusting his baggy blue t-shirt to fall conveniently over his lover region

I have a feeling you meant "lower region," but this is a million times better. ^___^

Ha ha, I like how you managed to make it work out that Sasuke's mind wanders to Kakashi when he tries to distract himself from his erection and then he starts wanking off with that being the last thought in his mind...

This is a really good fic. Sasuke's very in-character and it's so GREAT the way you're developing everything, it feels very convincing and realistic! I think you can really swing a realistic relationship between these two the way that you're going, unlike most fics that toss them together despite the fact there is obviusly NO affection between Kakashi and Sasuke on the show. I'm loving this fic and I can't wait to see what happens next!!! Please please please write more!!! PLEASE!!!! I'll beta for you! If for no other reason than to get my hands on more of this stuff as fast as possible, but yeah I also like to beta and I'll do it for free the smut alone! *hops on one foot* Please post more and/or let me beta!!!

): I'm still waiting for that update... you are going to update right?

Luv it^^

Some weak points -dialogue maybe? But all in all good :D.

I really like the way it started off and i hope you update soon cause you sure have my attention
bye bye hope to reade more soon!

Gaaah.

Write more, you. My mate has just got me into Naruto fiction.

Technically, nothing really happened in that chapter. It was well written though. And flashbacks make the world go round. I demand some plot development!

Dooo eeet

Tsx