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for I Hate You

by ToxicSpirit

person S2
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! Don't be nervous about your writing. Its awsome. Its been sometime a good fic came out with Sasu-chan...Kakasasu is sexy. Itasasu is sexy too..
:goes off into lala land: ^-^ I can't wait for next chapter! Maybe Itachi comes and visits..hehehe
person Michiru
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you could break the paragraphs up a bit more and put more spaces between them, it would make it so much easier to read...

So far, it's interesting... please continue! :)