rate_review Reviews

I just re-read this story again and fell back in love with it! one of my all time favorites..<3 seriously!!

Oh man I absolutely love this story. . .I read it on Fanfiction.net and had to come to adultfanfiction.net in order to read the smut! lol! You're an awesome writer!!!

Twenty four chapters of PURE.FUCKING.WIN. this was at this was. there aren't a lot of authors i favourite, but hun, you just got added to me list *runs off to read more stories on her NaruSasu charged craze*

I think it's really unfair that you make Sasuke the bad guy, considering it's Naruto's fault.

Awwwwwwu. I loved this story. Very creative, and well written. And for some reason I just can't get out of my head that one part where they were horse back riding, and Sioux's thoughts were 'driiiiifting to the left'..... Any ways. I enjoyed this story. The pace was good. Not too rushed, and not dragged out. Good job ^^

Keep up the good work!

~Angel

this story was just so nicely done... it had all the right amount of drama, angst, humor, etc... i just loved it!!! all of the characters were just ooc enough to make it work in this au, but still kept in character, except gaara, i think. he was a bit more ooc then the rest of them. but i still loved it. can't wait to read the rest of your work! keep up the great work! =^-^=

i know that u said something aboout there being an epilogue for this story, can you email me at kairna3@yahoo.com when you do so that i won't miss it... thanks =^-^=

Hi!
I just joined here so im not completely sure how this works but well see... I read your fic, the second one ive ever read in this Naruto category, so this all is new for me.

First of all, i really enjoyed your fic. I found it really entertaining and it made me smile like maniac always when reading it and also when just thinkig about it. So i ended up trying to restrain myself laughing out loud and smirking at everything to prevent my parent asking stupid questions about my happiness.

The way you deepened Naruto's personality in this fic made me think a lot of things and wanting me to be more content with my life. Hi was absolutely lovely in this fic. No wonder everyone were after him.
I loved how mischievous Naruto was towards Sasuke and how confused Sasuke was about it. And i was too until you put us inside also Naruto's head. It was really sweet to read what they tought about each other not knowing the other one's thoughts. It made my opinion about Sasuke more softened and approval. They were so cute at Naruto's home. Especially Sasuke!

Fic really hit me hard. You made me wanting to read all the time, neglect my homeworks and sleep. I dont know if it was the relationship between two boys or genious style of writing which enthraled me through the fic.

I appreciate the effort you made for the fic. (The lyrics and such)I think the riding part was brilliant but my absolutely favourite was the drag show! I searched the songs they sang and listened then meanwhile reading the equivalent part in the story. And i had good time, didnt i! And so i refound three songs from my youth which i had compelety forgot. Thank you! Im sorry that i didnt found the song Felipe American Princess. It sounded really interesting, not familiar tho'. And so back to the business. I imagined the whole drag show scene in front of my eyes. And giggled my head off.

I liked the ending until the dance at the party. Somehow i think the present was pretty lame or something. What did they do with that garden anyway? And for me that sex part was in unnecessary, almost skipped it... Well the actual ending, last three chapters, were okay. I dont know why it happens to me many times: i read fic for desire of some smutness and then i got really into it and be content just with the love confession parts. So many times i just like more the beginning part where you evolve and prime the plot.
And you were really good in that! The best parts of the fic were over after the draq show. Thats typical for the fic ive read...Or maybe its typical for me to think like that.

I think your fic was happy, hooking, vivid and adorable. You used nice vocabulary, lots of new words for me. Now i try to forget the specifics of this fic and read some others. And then after a while read this again. =)

Thanks for making me happy! Have a nice weekend!

- A reader from Finland

Hey there! I read this amazing fic about a year ago, but haven't had the opportunity to review it. (Ok, I had, I was just too lazy, sorry. XD) So, what can I say? It's a really amazing story, one of the best AU fics I've ever read. (Actually I hadn't liked AU fics before I read yours, and now I read more AU than Canon...) Anyway, I love "your" Naruto. Oh, and I'm in love with Naru(seme)xSasUke since I read Chasing Naruto... it's just sooo right. :D After all, I feel a need to thank you for sharing this amazing fic with us. This is a fic that I will read again and again.

Best wishes: Pansy

luv it Great story and amazing ending