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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy you updated! Seriously, you have no idea how much I look forward to reading new chapters of this story. (I'm kind of sad that it will be ending with the next chapter - and maybe epilogue - but even good things must come to an end sometime, I suppose. :p I just hope that you will write more sasunaru fanfiction!) I was really happy with this chapter... I'm glad that Naruto has finally seemed to forgive Sasuke, and that both of them have moved on. The angst is necessary and adds to the story, but I enjoy fluff so much more. ^^; And... well, really, I can't seem to find anything else to say other than I loved this chapter, and I look forward to reading the next one. *^^*
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Gggoooo~ chapiter 23! They finally got together! *rejoice* *throws confetti*
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"The ball’s in my court now, Uchiha. He smirked. Let’s play. " when i read this sentence, i went brain-dead and thoguth about you-know-what. i had to read this three times before cracjing up and realising the meaning of it.
"Note to self: Stupidity breeds phenomenal kissers." i really wished my boyfriend was an idiot to test the theory...
"I’m going to sweep my little Prince Charming off his feet.” i melted; a cliché sentence, but soooooo a\meltish when naruto says it...
i loooved this!!!!!
"Note to self: Stupidity breeds phenomenal kissers." i really wished my boyfriend was an idiot to test the theory...
"I’m going to sweep my little Prince Charming off his feet.” i melted; a cliché sentence, but soooooo a\meltish when naruto says it...
i loooved this!!!!!
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was like awesome man. I read the whole thing up to now. It took me three days between school work and through other mundane duties to get to this very chapter. I await your Epilogue.
Usually, I dislike comedy fanfiction but you found a way to grab my attention and keep it there, enough to glue my eyes on this damned screen four hours past late. I love the way you added the "funny-ness" in this story without actuaclly distorting the quality of it. Man, your depiction of Naruto is just perfect in my eyes and Sasuke is just so irresistable in this lovely fiction. And dude, you even did the impossible for me! You actually got me to admire Gaara to the point that I might even want to read fics solely based on him. And Niji, what a little bastard.
Well, all in all I have nothing to really tell you to actually help you improve this story. It's as perfect as it is. And one more thing, any suggestions for fanfics, preferably Naruto/Sasuke, that have as much quality as yours seem to have?
-minijudi (minijudi2003@yahoo.com)
You rock. I admire your dedication to us when you're obviously struggling through college. Good luck in your studies. ^_^
Usually, I dislike comedy fanfiction but you found a way to grab my attention and keep it there, enough to glue my eyes on this damned screen four hours past late. I love the way you added the "funny-ness" in this story without actuaclly distorting the quality of it. Man, your depiction of Naruto is just perfect in my eyes and Sasuke is just so irresistable in this lovely fiction. And dude, you even did the impossible for me! You actually got me to admire Gaara to the point that I might even want to read fics solely based on him. And Niji, what a little bastard.
Well, all in all I have nothing to really tell you to actually help you improve this story. It's as perfect as it is. And one more thing, any suggestions for fanfics, preferably Naruto/Sasuke, that have as much quality as yours seem to have?
-minijudi (minijudi2003@yahoo.com)
You rock. I admire your dedication to us when you're obviously struggling through college. Good luck in your studies. ^_^
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omfg this chapter was great! But the cliffhanger. ;~; I haven't reviewed this story before but I want to let you know I check aff everyday to see if you've updated. Keep up the great work!
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMGOMGOMG! I love this I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! i CANT WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER NE! NICE PLOTTING STYLE~ IS THERE GONNA BE A SMUT? hahahahaha! Oooooah~ I cant wait really, I love your fic! PLZPLZPLZPLZ keep up the good work ne! Ganbade yo!
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhh...finally, after so so long, they've admitted things.
I loved the way their relationship progressed, and how kickass Naruto was.
I love you! Really, your fic's amazing. I wish I could write that way.
Oooohhhh...are we gonna get a lemon, finally?
I loved the way their relationship progressed, and how kickass Naruto was.
I love you! Really, your fic's amazing. I wish I could write that way.
Oooohhhh...are we gonna get a lemon, finally?
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great!! I love it! Sorry, but I can't think of anything smarter to say :3
The disclaimer "READERS BE WARNED. THE FOLLOWING WILL AFFECT YOUR BRAIN IN MYSTERIOUS WAYS." is absolutely right, I can tell! XD
Hope to read the next chapter soon ^^.
The disclaimer "READERS BE WARNED. THE FOLLOWING WILL AFFECT YOUR BRAIN IN MYSTERIOUS WAYS." is absolutely right, I can tell! XD
Hope to read the next chapter soon ^^.
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the fic. ^^ Keep it up, sweetheart.
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg.. you scared me so bad when i saw the first part. i thought you quit this fic for sure.
i love this chapter!!!! please please please update soon!! *tears*
i love this chapter!!!! please please please update soon!! *tears*