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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person aiimeru
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*does a happy dance* yay! you updated! please write more k? I realllllllyyyy like this story! hope to read more soon! bai bai! :)
person Absolute--
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm…For some reason, I very much dislike Neji in this story…*gasp* Now, that’s a first…I’ve always liked him…
The ‘Half Lidded Gaze of Doom’…Pretty catchy…Sounds just like Naruto.
Ooh, the drama, the suspense! Why is Naruto lying about taking Horticulture? Ahhh, I’m bursting with questions…
But wait, what’s this? Another chapter? Oh my, I must be off and read it!
*Hands you a hollow chocolate bunny* It’s Peter. ^^
*Jumps to the next chapter*
person Absolute--
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-Uzumaki Naruto is Sexy. Or, at least, that’s what he tells himself. Twenty-four hours a day, seven days a week.- Damn straight. XD I was laughing at the first line for a few minutes…What a great opener…
‘In a Doujinshi somewhere, a chibi Gaara was smiling goofily holding up a victory sign, hearts dancing around his head.’ *LAUGHS* You crack me up, AkaiTsume-san.
Uh oh…Sasuke’s going to be pissed off…Naruto’s giving out massages…
Chibi Gaara is evil…eviler, no less.
Not the sweeping off the feet…*groans* Sasuke, you copy-cat.
Hmmm…Just parroting stuff back at you isn’t a great review…
Well…How about a question then? Do you write often? Because your writing level seems exceedingly complex. Or are you in college…(Maybe it’s both, naa?) Well, I’m in love with this story, I can assure you of that.
And for -this- chapter, you get a Reese's Peanut Butter Egg! ^^ They're really good. They have my approval. *laughs* Although, it's not worth much...
person Absolute--
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haaaa?! This is amazing! I'm at a loss for words; this is brilliant work! I really, really, really liked that part where Naruto pulls out his already finished paper...XD I was laughing for five minutes STRAIGHT! No kidding...
The grammar and spelling were perfect; the word-usage was dazzling…This was a really great read! You get some Ice Cream! *hands you a Ben & Jerry’s pint* Nyahhaa!
*Waltzes off to the next chapter*
person dinkscythe
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chapter 7

damn, they're so cute.
person Absolute--
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAAAAA!!! This was such an amusing chapter! This is definitely one of my favorite Fan Fictions...You're a great author!
I can't even begin to say what's great about this...Ah, this isn't a very good review...Lesse...
I think it’s absolutely ridiculous how you’re making Naruto…XD I was laughing so hard when he was working out. *grins* And that is how I think Naruto would turn out when he gets older…^^
And…I dunno…There’s something about this story that really catches my attention. I can’t stop reading it…And I –need- to review but I can’t think of what to say…>.<’’ Weird.
*Hands you a watermelon* Heh.
person sabrina
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*bows deeply and kisses you* I lub you and your story! *-* Along with Asuka Kureru, you two are my new sheros when it comes to naruto fanfiction. I would love it if you sent me the bloopers and outtakes. ^^ This chappie was good. I was about to jump through the screen and rip naruto's spine and beat him over the head with it for hurting poor sasu-chan's feeling when he made up for it so now i'm mollifed for now. What is naruto up to anyway? He better be planning something romantic for sasu-chan!
person Bishihuntress
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Squee~ All great fanfics deserve some fan work for them, so your presents at http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/17449156/ enjoy (^_^)
person Absolute--
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once AGAIN, a beautifully written chapter! Neji head banging was a hilarious image in my head; although, it was surprisingly easy to imagine. And I really liked that laundry scene. *laughs*
Naruto is so adorable…XD And for this chapter you get a rabbit in a top hat!
And I'm off to the next chapter.
person Saw
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, this was an interesting, and slightly odd, read. What is Naruto up to? Why is everyone attracted to him? What is he going to do about it? Haha, so many questions, ah!
Oh, and Naruto slathered with ice cream was t3h hot...XP