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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Naruto’s such a show off…
That massage looks tempting. I’m jealous, Sasuke. >.<’’’
Great, great, once more a wonderful chapter! I love your writing style. It’s very refreshing to read a fan fiction where everyone is in character yet the story still has an original ring to it. You’ve accomplished that magnificently. Although, since it IS an Alternate Universe…*grins* It’s still an awesome story. I like AUs.
Keep up the wicked awesome work!
*scampers off to the next chapter*
That massage looks tempting. I’m jealous, Sasuke. >.<’’’
Great, great, once more a wonderful chapter! I love your writing style. It’s very refreshing to read a fan fiction where everyone is in character yet the story still has an original ring to it. You’ve accomplished that magnificently. Although, since it IS an Alternate Universe…*grins* It’s still an awesome story. I like AUs.
Keep up the wicked awesome work!
*scampers off to the next chapter*
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, my review was cut short...
Once more a wonderful chapter! I love your writing style. It’s very refreshing to read a fan fiction where everyone is in character yet the story still has an original ring to it. You’ve accomplished that magnificently. Although, since it IS an Alternate Universe…*grins* It’s still an awesome story. I like AUs.
Keep up the wicked awesome work!
*scampers off to the next chapter*
Will it send? Hmmm...
Once more a wonderful chapter! I love your writing style. It’s very refreshing to read a fan fiction where everyone is in character yet the story still has an original ring to it. You’ve accomplished that magnificently. Although, since it IS an Alternate Universe…*grins* It’s still an awesome story. I like AUs.
Keep up the wicked awesome work!
*scampers off to the next chapter*
Will it send? Hmmm...
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man that was awsome, please hurry and update A.S.A.P. and keep up the good work.
TaTa
TaTa
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Shit is right.
OH MY GOD! When I read that first bit I was thinking ‘Let this be Sasuke’s nightmare or SOMETHING, please!’ I was scared.
April fools, huh? Crazy authoress. And I was laughing for quite some time after that…
Gaara smirked? Oh dear…(Well, then again, Sasuke grinned so I guess I’m not surprised.)
Neji is pushy…I tell ya what…*grins*
And as thanks for such a wonderful cliffhanger that I don’t have to endure, seeing as the next chapter is UP, I will give you a loaf of cinnamon swirl bread. Me mum taught me how to make it! ^^
*rolls over to the next chapter*
OH MY GOD! When I read that first bit I was thinking ‘Let this be Sasuke’s nightmare or SOMETHING, please!’ I was scared.
April fools, huh? Crazy authoress. And I was laughing for quite some time after that…
Gaara smirked? Oh dear…(Well, then again, Sasuke grinned so I guess I’m not surprised.)
Neji is pushy…I tell ya what…*grins*
And as thanks for such a wonderful cliffhanger that I don’t have to endure, seeing as the next chapter is UP, I will give you a loaf of cinnamon swirl bread. Me mum taught me how to make it! ^^
*rolls over to the next chapter*
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAHHHH update! this is great and i love the bit with gaara and naruto having the eating competition -^-^- i can't wait for the next chappy
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay an update!! getting closer to finding out who naruto likes!! i really enjoy your fic, update soon!!
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love this fic. I am anxiously waiting for more...especially the 'good parts'. :D Yeah!
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heyhey. ermm, im feeling the whole "new take on Naruto’s personality" thing, but dude, you totally gave his personality like a 180. or maybe im exaggerating a bit (or a lot). but either way, your writing's kickass. sweet/funny stuff. keep it up.
much huggles, - melt -
much huggles, - melt -
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, that chibi Gaara sounds so adorable with its actions. Kyaaa!! I thought Sasuke was going to get rejected which would be a bummer b/c I just a read a story with Sasuke getting rejected. x[
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Naruto seems very sure of Sasuke...it feels odd that he did not know he was bi and now he is teasing Sasuke and turning the others down,very slowly and seems to have a secret job or something...I guess it is ..I do not know how I feel about his attitude,it seems to have changed somehow..Sorry..confusion