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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh..... Chibi Gaara is plotting! Muhahaha!! Bwahahahahaha!!! *cough, choke, gasp, wheeze*
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is very good. I love the detail of the AU and the interactions between Naruto and his suitors.
This family thing intrigues me. Will we meet Konohamaru? and maybe Inari?
Update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
This family thing intrigues me. Will we meet Konohamaru? and maybe Inari?
Update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THat was another great chapter. You are just pure talent. The way you are developing the characters and their relationships is just amazing. Keep up the good work>
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I had a Michigan State moment in this chapter...Anyway. Yes, there will be a little more input from the females now (not a lot though). ^_~
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMGAH! More! need more! naruto is such a tease i luv it!
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh this is a great chapter. It seems Naruto really wants Sasuke to make things happen, with the exception that Sasuke is so repressed he can barely tell Naruto or at least show him that he is interested. Naruto has even noticed the jealousy. He is mr. smartypants though and I know he will find a way to pave the road to Sasuke (well, he has started).
Great going, I love this fic and I can't wait to see more of it. I was glad to do a rec for it and I hope people are appreciating your wonderful storyline and writing.
Keep it up!
Great going, I love this fic and I can't wait to see more of it. I was glad to do a rec for it and I hope people are appreciating your wonderful storyline and writing.
Keep it up!
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww! I *love* chibi Gaara. If you can find a way to squeeze in a Chibi Naruto and/or Chibi Sasuke you will officially be my Naruto Goddess of the week. Update soon!
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey love this story! so happy to find a new chap up today...I just noticed a few things you might want to fix right quick so it'll be right for the rest of aff to read ^___~
1) when Naru and Saku are talkin in the cafe...'Sakura gazed at him for a long moment before lifting her head off her chin, planting that hand on the table, and leaning forward with an evil grin.' I think that's humanely iimpossible ^__~ 'Lifting her chin off her hand' or 'head off her hand' would make better sense ^____^
2) When Naru gives in to tell Saku what's up...he says '“Well...um...it turns out that a...person I’ve known for a while likes me. Really likes me.” He turned a little red and looked away. “And he’s not the only one.” and then continue on and saku says '“Does he like you back?”' that totally contradicts his first statement.
that was all i really noticed...so glad you had naru and gaara go out..love gaara! Chibi gaara? haha too funny! could sooo picture him doing that ^__^ And totally kawaii that naruto asked sask to go back to his home for the weekend...wasn't expecting that! good times!
Can't wait for the next up'd! Make it soon!!
1) when Naru and Saku are talkin in the cafe...'Sakura gazed at him for a long moment before lifting her head off her chin, planting that hand on the table, and leaning forward with an evil grin.' I think that's humanely iimpossible ^__~ 'Lifting her chin off her hand' or 'head off her hand' would make better sense ^____^
2) When Naru gives in to tell Saku what's up...he says '“Well...um...it turns out that a...person I’ve known for a while likes me. Really likes me.” He turned a little red and looked away. “And he’s not the only one.” and then continue on and saku says '“Does he like you back?”' that totally contradicts his first statement.
that was all i really noticed...so glad you had naru and gaara go out..love gaara! Chibi gaara? haha too funny! could sooo picture him doing that ^__^ And totally kawaii that naruto asked sask to go back to his home for the weekend...wasn't expecting that! good times!
Can't wait for the next up'd! Make it soon!!
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My favorite Sakura line of all time
<< “Why, Naruto! Give me some credit, will you?” She smirked. “It’d only take ten seconds.” >>
you are an amazing writer, I love the plot, and I love your characterizations, and I love how god damn funny this is. Can't wait till the next chapter, you rock.
<< “Why, Naruto! Give me some credit, will you?” She smirked. “It’d only take ten seconds.” >>
you are an amazing writer, I love the plot, and I love your characterizations, and I love how god damn funny this is. Can't wait till the next chapter, you rock.
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
me want SasuNaru!!!! keep up the good work!!!