rate_review Reviews

This is very amusing,smoothly written ,the characters are very well drawn and the status quo keeps shifting.I am addicted.I can not think of a criticism and unlike some of my reveiws I do not feel I have to be encouraging 'cause you got it.You a writer dude.

I have the same problem with waking up as Naruto... well, maybe not that strong, I don't think I would get anywhere this way, but I talk. ^^; He's a lucky, lucky man... I want to wake up like this too! ._. But nooo, it's always my mum... Anyway, I still love you. =D

What an incredibly frustrating chapter...I love it! Please continue! Oh, and was it just me, or did Naruto have an extremely freaky Orochimaru moment there at the end...huh...well, I look forward to the next chapter! Ja!

I was never one for reading Yaoi, btu this stuff is gewd! I love it, i'm only up to chapt 3 but i love how you capture the reader in it, it's not just about sex, but teasing and... GAH! so good! I hope you update soon so I have more stuff to read, ur such a good writter!<3

Yay! i love it as usual! though the start is tense, with the fight going on and all. and sasuke finally initiated! Really am keen on finding out what is going on with naruto... weekend is coming soon erm do a double update! haha... if that is possible.

update update update >< please please please please

QuaHAHAHAHAAA~! Sweet! Naruto was sooo awake, if not he'll get Sasuke to admit it. I love Kiba!!! Big-O thanks to Kiba for messing up Naruto's plans, whatever that is. *gasp* Naruto is growing weed! or just flowers. XD

I'm really really loving this story and I'm sorry I didn't find it sooner. You are absolutely amazing when it comes to dialogue, especially with the way Naruto speaks, and I found myself cracking up laughing many times while reading. I think you really did a wonderful job turning the Naruto we know into the kind of man he'd be if he was brought up in America and pushing 20. So many priceless moments in your story, I don't think I could count them all. And I admit, that while at first I thought that the story was just going to be another funny jaunt through the steps that Naruto and Sasuke take to finally make their way together, I was delighted to see that the further I read, the more in depth the characters got and the greater the mysteries around Naruto became. I'm so happy that you made Naruto out to be smarter than he looks, or really just able to read people well without letting petty emotions get in the way of just accepting things at face value. I'm glad to see that someone else realizes that it takes a lot of experience and personal decisions for someone to come across that comfortable with themselves and cheerful in life, and Naruto is definitely not a dumb blond. Please keep up the great work since I'm going to be listing this fic for recommendation over on http://collide.snowfaerie.net/ . It's truly working out to be a gem that everyone needs to appreciate :D

three words. i LOVE it. my god i love it. HOT guyxguy action...(go SASUKE!!) and really cooool naruto...gaaah i love naruto...aahhaha. update soon!

lol between here and FF.com, I can't seem to get enough of this story! sigh....I love it, you got me xtremely hooked!!!!! I can't wait till the next update! In terms of how it went this chapter, I give major props for the Naruto's lie over the class he was taking. It has me wondering what could he possibly been doing, and even though Naruto is not necessarily naïve I'm kind of glad that the doubt is created for the reader as in to whether or not he remembers the kiss. You have a talent of of weaving cliff hangers! Anyway, I got to stop this here, not to fill your head with bubles of air. lol Maybe if I complain more instead of complimenting you, it might motivate you to write longer chapters! lol nah, but do hurry, I can't wait to find out what happens next!