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April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. it's one of my favorite naruto fan fics ever. i love the way you write and i always look forward to reading the next chapter. if i have time when a new chapter is up, i sometimes read the whole story over again lol. its good. keep it up!
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April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Will Gaara hear what happened between Naruto, Neji, and Sasuke? Or will he see the damage that was delt? Hmmm ^_^ Another great chapter. Can't wait for the next. Ja!
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April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love how this is getting complex...i think it is anyway. And the coconut thing was awesome ^__^
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such an amazing story you have to keep writing! I cannot beleive you left such a cliffhanger like that, im going to go crazy!
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. Where has Naruto been going? I hope we find out soon.
Hopefully everthing turns out OK.
Update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Hopefully everthing turns out OK.
Update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You ... youuuuu!!! How can you write such a delicious x 10 story! aiyaaaa Let me tell you what happens when I read the fic
Me: *patiently reading savoring each and every single word, sometimes reading each sentence twice to get the full effect of the emotions*
Webpage: *stays on the line that " - " is reading so that he doesn't give away what happens in the next sentence before she absorbs the content she's read till that point*
LOL ^^; And you make me insane! I love you I do, I really do!! lol The kiss scene...it was so...ahhh it was SOOOO HOT! gahhh lol. I want Naruto under me 0.o; *pushes Sasuke out of the picture* I'm soooooooo in love with this chapter! And I'm dying to know what that Horticulture lie's about! What could he be doing out in the dirt.
I have a question though! Remember in the first chapter you wrote that Naruto asked Sasuke to take a picture of him and so there's a pic of that disarming smile of Naruto in Sasuke's room...on his desk! And Naruto's been to his room a few times now...and there's been no mention about it :O not even a flicker of emotion lol. ^^ Was just curious...especially since Naruto's on the computer right now. I wonder if it's something of significance? Because, 1/4 of the first chapter was dedicated to that moment, ne? (I looooove that scene, btw...but whenever I re-read that chapter, I skip that part, because it's toooo ahhh how shall I say this...it's just too ... well, I can't describe it...it's positive though ;) )
I wonder how long this fic is gonna be btw? Because your other one was only 3 chapters... I hope you don't end this fic the way you did the last one. Because, I wanted more from that one 0o; I really did. So, I just hope, that this one, whenever it ends (never? as long as you update as frequently as you do now! and still have it so fantastic!!!!!!! AHHHHHHH *gives u a big sloppy kiss on the cheek and forehead* I LOVE YOU -- no, I do not have lesbian tendencies lol ^^ )
Anyway :D Keep writing. Keep making me happy. (Sorry for the long review 0.o;)
Me: *patiently reading savoring each and every single word, sometimes reading each sentence twice to get the full effect of the emotions*
Webpage: *stays on the line that " - " is reading so that he doesn't give away what happens in the next sentence before she absorbs the content she's read till that point*
LOL ^^; And you make me insane! I love you I do, I really do!! lol The kiss scene...it was so...ahhh it was SOOOO HOT! gahhh lol. I want Naruto under me 0.o; *pushes Sasuke out of the picture* I'm soooooooo in love with this chapter! And I'm dying to know what that Horticulture lie's about! What could he be doing out in the dirt.
I have a question though! Remember in the first chapter you wrote that Naruto asked Sasuke to take a picture of him and so there's a pic of that disarming smile of Naruto in Sasuke's room...on his desk! And Naruto's been to his room a few times now...and there's been no mention about it :O not even a flicker of emotion lol. ^^ Was just curious...especially since Naruto's on the computer right now. I wonder if it's something of significance? Because, 1/4 of the first chapter was dedicated to that moment, ne? (I looooove that scene, btw...but whenever I re-read that chapter, I skip that part, because it's toooo ahhh how shall I say this...it's just too ... well, I can't describe it...it's positive though ;) )
I wonder how long this fic is gonna be btw? Because your other one was only 3 chapters... I hope you don't end this fic the way you did the last one. Because, I wanted more from that one 0o; I really did. So, I just hope, that this one, whenever it ends (never? as long as you update as frequently as you do now! and still have it so fantastic!!!!!!! AHHHHHHH *gives u a big sloppy kiss on the cheek and forehead* I LOVE YOU -- no, I do not have lesbian tendencies lol ^^ )
Anyway :D Keep writing. Keep making me happy. (Sorry for the long review 0.o;)
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was amazing! I wasnt expecting an update so soon after I read it, but I'm blown away. I can't figure out whether or not Naruto was really asleep, and why would he lie to Sasuke like that?!
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think Naruto is liying about the being half asleep part. i mean if he can lie about taking that class (have no idea how u spell it ._.) he can surly lie about that. lol. but poor Sasuke. he's being put through hell. XD well i dont really know wuts going to happen next...so u must update! XD YAY!
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ARGH! WHY? I Want some action!!! NOW! *Cries* The plot is definately thickening!!!!! Now there's that whole "what's up with Naruto" thing....sheesh! I hope you update soon or i will definately have a seisure or something...d(^-^)b
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHH! I don't think I can wait for the next chapter! I can't believe Sasuke actually KISSED Naruto! Dammit, Uchiha! Just admit that you like him already!!! If only Naruto was "awake" enough to kiss him back. So what's up with Naruto!? Horticulture?! You have to update soon and answer all my questions! That chapter wasnt' long enough for my liking! Anyway, I think you're doing a great job. All the angst and the suspense adds to the story a lot. What happened to Gaara? The fight between Neji and Sasuke was very realistic, without making it too much. Keep up the great work and keep posting!