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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person Black Hikari
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Go Neji!! NejixNaruto forever! ^o^
person SasukeItachiSmex
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. o-o The kiss..was...-Drools an amount that isn't human- I loved this chapter! Especially the qurreal between Sasuke and Neji. >> That... Was good, very good, and the fact that Naruto *Could* of been awake, and he just let it happen, is hotter than if he was asleep. O_O Of course, pretending that he WAS asleep and making Sasuke think he was lucky for it...-Snickers-

Got another thing coming, doesn't he? xD
person Anon
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your Naruto; I don't know what to make of him, lol. I'm willing to bet that he was awake and faking his cluelessness. He seems pretty sneaky like that.
person Michrure
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cries* You need to write longer chapters! They end so soon! I must find out what is going to happen! Great work, and keep going!
person Spectre
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD oh ga if I was Sas' I'd be sooo frustrated. XD;; Youre good :P.
person AkaiTsume
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The girls will be arriving soon, don't you worry. Things are about to get...interesting. And what is Naruto planning? Hmmm. 0_o
person Liliath
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!COOL!!AWESOME!!UPDATE!!*breath*...*cough* ^^ YAY!!!!!!
person Letta
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And the plot thickens... I love the way Sasuke comes to the rescue, but Naruto ends up saving the day... for himself. Sasuke sounds like a very confused boy, and it doesn't help that Naruto's being so mysterious. I also loved hoe Kiba teased Naruto about Sasuke being his boyfriend. Especially since Naruto really didn't seem to mind. Of course, now I'm really curious as to what Naruto was doing if it wasn't horticulture. Really looking forward to the next update, and glad for this one.
person Rachel Dracon
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, that was very interesting. Glad to see Sasuke didn't do the predictable, 'oh my gods, he was kissing Neji, he's in love with Neji, I have no chance so now I'll brood until Naruto comes and tell me to my face that it was nothing.' The fight was much better. I'm glad we won't be counting Neji you yet though, there's always fun things he can do later! ^.^ Wow, Naruto really seems pretty cagey, like he's got a lot of stuff under control that you wouldn't even think he'd know about at first glance. Wonder what he was _really_ doing when he lied to Sasuke. Great chapter, update again soon please!
person Heather
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that neji is just so damn irritating...trying to get between naruto and sasuke like that! but a little friendly (or maybe not so friendly) romantic competition can be good. but i digress...another great chapter as usual. but after reading it i'm just left stumped. like, what the fuck is naruto pulling? does it concern sasuke, or is it just something naruto doesn't want him to know about? well, i'm sure you'll answer that in good time, so no need to ask. but like i usually say, i can't wait for the next chapter!!! toodles!