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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person Sabrina
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fweeeee! that was close sasuke! Sasuke shouda gotta cop and feel though while he was withering on top of a knocked out Naruto. And the half asleep naruto didn't mind the kiss I think either. I think he just wanted an answer. I hope Sasuke goes for the gold and scores. I'm rooting for the guy. And what is Naruto up to anyway? What is he planning, hmmmmmm? I want more fluff between Naruto and sasuke. Please!!! *puppy eyes* I hope Naruto doesn't reject sasuke. Sasuke is so sweet and sexy in your version. I'll rip Naruto's heart and feed it to my dog if he rejects or hurts my poor sasuke-chan!! *huggles him*
person lo
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story. You really make the characters come to life with thier complexity. YOu are very talented, so keep up the good work.
person Catleya
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A Devious Naruto?? This keeps getting more interesting by chapter.... Addiction possibility at the highest.... Must.Have.More...... =^.^=
person 123
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*glomps you* excellent writing!
person Hitomi
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Ch. 6)
"No reason, you just looked tasty" - yeah. I'm for that!^^

Hmmm.. I really do wonder if Naruto was *really* asleep...

Excellent chapter! I'm intrigued! What is the secret Naruto is hiding? And when will Sasuke get his freakin' reason together and fuck Naruto?! XDDD
Just wanted to comment and credit your wonderful teenage slang that really fits this fanfiction *prefectly*. Way ta go!^^


Until teh next,
Ja ne~
person Myuki-chan
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh how I LOVE you. XD
You made me burst out screaming, "Oh s***!" at least 5 times. lol I also found it terribly cute that Neji and Sasuke were fighting over Naruto... Hee~
I am very curious as to what Naruto was really doing. :)
*bounces* Ahahah I'm all hyper now. I look forward to the next update!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, that chapter ROCKED!!! It was soooooo totally awesome!!! Yeah!!! ^^ Okay, now that I have that out of my system.......... *ahem* ^___~ I can't wait for the next chapter!!! *wants to know what Naru-kun is up to* Oh, and this rivalry between Sasu-kun and Neji (and Gaara now, too, ne?) is great!!! Quite funny and realistic. ^___^ Oh, and just a thought: I think that Naruto -was- asleep, and that his "half-lidded gaze of doom" is kinda' like the AU representatin of Kyuubi. However, that doesn't mean that he won't remember what happened......... *evil grin* Thanks again for updating, and as always, keep up the good work and update ASAP!!! Ja ne!!!
person Sammei
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ONE!!~!!1111!!!!!!

Love ya, and I'll read this for real soon. ^___^ <33
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THE STORY~! and you! since you really put a lot of effort and most importantly... update frequently. it is really very hard to update frequently, especially after the initial faze of writing dies out. heheh.... like me :P can't get to continue my stories in ff.net. really admire yr passion and yr flair for writing... really got me very engrossed. cheers! and rox on! :D
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
and i luv the april fool joke. lol. cannot settle down with a straight face after that thing.... fnacy such a joke. :P