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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person 123
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Squishy goodness!!!

*dances* Whats next? SMUT!!! Ah haha, I kid. The "hall" sort of place where the party is being held at is going to burst into flames, isnt it?

.....

And THEN we get smut!

I should just really, really give up on trying to predict stuff in your story...but since you do lovely, nice long chapters...something (besides smut ^_^) is going to happen. Gaara and Orochi start dating? Ohh, I do hope you tell us what the mysterious project Naruto's been woking on is.

And for the love of god, let Sasuke and Naruto stay together for longer than a chapter this time! I love joo!! Keep up the excellent writing!

And that part where Naruto is dancing to the Ghost Busters? Gold.
person Mercedes
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*spazzes* YES!!! *dances around* YesyesyesyesyesYES!!! It's about farkin' TIME that Sasuke did something right! I almost thought he'd screwed it up again at one point during their conversation at the end, but he held back his retorts and pulled through! Plus, Naruto being Naruto, is certainly willing to forgive the one he's inb love with. ^_^

Awesome scene with them having the same epiphany simultaneously. That was definately a fangirl-sque moment. ^_^ Sasuke's play-by-play of the fight at the beginning was great, too. All in all, you had my emotions going all over the place!

*dances some more* I'm too happy! I have to go read that chapter again! ^_______^ *zoom!*
person vegeta's slave
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing, you are awesome. I hope you continue to write the rest of it. I can't wait for some Naruto Sasuke loving.
person Ryuko
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^_______________^ Whee for disclaimers! Anywho...FINALLY! OMGYOUFINALLYGOTHEMTOGETHERICAN'TBELIEVEITYOUROCKSOMUCHICAN'TWAITFORTHENEXTCHAP!!
*exhales* And that about sums up my excitement for this update. I could go on, really, but anymore all caps would kill your eyes and after such an awesome, awesome chapter you don't deserve that at all. I can't believe it's really almost over. *tears up* I almost don't want to see it go...But, when it finishes you'll write another fic, ne? And...even if it isn't NaruSasu, or even Naruto, I'd still read it, because you rule. The. Macroverse. So, keep me updated please. Pretty please. :)
person Salla
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is sooo good..I love it <3<3<3<3 I almost curse you but you did update so I didn't..please more..*addikt* xDDD I loooove this story so much..You're good writer...( I can't write good review..-_-' well elämä on..xDD)
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*chokes on air* An update! Wow, and today's my birthday (the 19th)! This is the best gift I could ever hope for!! XD I'm going to comment on this one from beginning to end, so please forgive any confusion:

--Naruto killed everyone.
The End.--

*practically dies from heart-attack O_O;

--On second thought, I don’t have that big a death wish. This is the penultimate chapter, though I’ll probably being writing an epilogue as well.--

*sigh of relief* An epilogue...that's wonderful! ^_^

--This chapter is also dedicated to Yuurimaoh. I’m...honored to have affected you so deeply, and I hope that life only improves from here on.--

*chokes on soda* ...*blushes profusely* Wow, I don't know what to say...thank you. :3 Things are looking better nowadays. You can only take one day at a time no matter what the situation is...and even though I'm surrounded by hurdles, I only wish that no one I know ever has to go through what my friends and I went through. Your writing is vivid and is full of everything. Though we all trip over ourselves to constantly check for an update or a new fanfic from you, I know how long it must take and how busy you must be. I wish you the best in everything!


*continues to read, commenting on random things...*


--Oh god, he’s using bigger words. We’re all going to

die. Horribly, bloodily, painfully.--

ROFLMAO...yes, yes they are! XD Oh, I just love your

portrayal of Naruto...I love it!

--You coward!! Get back over here! If I’m going to

die, you sure as fuck are going to, too!! Sasuke

thought furiously--

EXACTLY! I completely agree with Sasuke!

--GAARA DID IT! IT WAS HIS IDEA! KILL HIM!--

*laughs with tears of myrth* Sure! Blame it all on

Gaara!

--“Isn’t that perfect. Not only am I a goddamn toy to

you three...”--

*clutches at heart* Yep, feel your pain...you poor

thing. But, they didn't mean it like that!

--I’m an idiot. A soon-to-be-deceased idiot.--

He's never ruling out that 'I'm going to die' theory,

is he? I wouldn't either if I were in his shoes!

--“I think you’re gorgeous, you think I’m

gorgeous...oh my, is that a bed?” ...NO.--

ROFLMAO! I can't get over that comment!

--“I ain’t ‘fraid of no ghosts...I hear it likes the

girls! I ain’t ‘fraid of no ghosts...YEAH, YEAH,

yeah...yeah...”

Now the blonde spotted Sasuke.--

*dies laughing* What an awkward moment! I can't

believe it...and things like that tend to really

happen, too! XD


--“Oh for...could you two not do that in plain sight??”--

*can't recover from this laughing fit* I was waiting for Kiba to come back in!! Priceless!

--“I’m going to sweep my little Prince Charming off his feet.”--

Uh-oh! Watch out Sasuke!

*****

Another excellent chapter! XD I cowered along with the three when Naruto became angry, I struggled with the clashing of Sasuke and Naruto's point of views...I rejoiced with everyone else when they finally came to an understanding! ^_^ Reading the last chapters of this story will be bittersweet...but, since it IS a story, all one has to do is go back and start from the beginning again! XD I, for one, won't despair in the hopes that you will continue to write fanfics of any kind. :3 Thank you for updating! You've caught us all by surprise and we've basked in the rays of the sun that is Chasing Naruto :D
person nekopooya
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just can't keep from loving this story! I wish my boyfriend would be like Naruto, aww maaan! I'm so gonna print this story when it's ready, keep up the good work and spread the NaruSasu love~!
person cibiboy
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is so great im so happy update u should make Gar+Niji fall in love so there not so lonely just a thought well update soon ok
person ghostninja85
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Two more to go. Sad, yet all good things must come to an end.

As for this one, I loved it. It's about damn time that the two of them finally figured out the craxy code they were sending each other and cifer it into "I love you and want to bonk like rabbits".

Hopefully that's coming soon.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter. A lot a lot.
person Herme23
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness, you are a god!!!!!!!! I've been checking every day for an update, and finally, another chapter! I'm so happy right now I could sing aloud with gelled hair and a broom myself. Thank you so much, and I wish you tons of money and great fortune in your life forever for writing such a great story! *Sprinkles fairy dust* Write on! Yours Herme