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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person NuttyApple
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gosh...that was so good! Hella better than mine, that's for sure *glares at her muses* You are my idol! And I could've sworn to gods I saw Terry Pratchett in there, that or I've been re-reading too much of his stuff...Anyway, please continue!

-=Kya=-
person rainbird
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First of all, I have to give you cookies for mentioning monty python *gives cookies* But yeah, I love this story. Its so funny...I love how Naruto is such a tease...probably the best AU I've read ^_^
person ThingIshNess
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
¡4 retpahC

(-: flesym fo em dnimer fo dnik uoY .looc oot era uoy *hgis* …oturaN

Opps… *reverses*

Chapter 4!

Naruto… *sigh* you are too cool. You kind of remind me of myself :-)

Lets see… we both give good massages. We both overwork ourselves at the gym to impress others. (My claim to fame being leg pressing 20 reps of 550 pounds, the bar wouldn’t hold anymore. Oww is an understatement)

Well props for Og, and his big stick. Props for good massages, and cute moments on the couch *drool*

Props for Gaara… because he deserves them and is awesome.

Another very well written chapter… As I close in on the last one!!!!

Love you
Your biggest fan,
-Jay-
person Sabrina
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good LAWD!!! *fans seLf* This is good to the ast drop. This the first AU ficce that I Like. And i LUB yoUr version of NarUto and SasUke. Keep it Up!
person Risa
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ummm... Re Reads the last paragraph and sentence... EEP!!! *ducks for cover*
Like the story... Please UPTDATE SOON!!!!!PPPPLLLLEEEEAAAASSSSEEEE!!!!
person k
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ordinarily I don't enjoy AU high school fics much, but this is one of the best I've ever read. Scratch that, it's THE best. You've done a fabulous job keeping the feeling of these characters true to the series, despite necessary adjustments to match their new environment. Your Naruto is especially interesting - he's both clueless and clever, which makes me happy. I love the pacing of the SasuNaru-ness too. I'd say this is one of my favorite new fics, I'll definitely keep checking back for more. Keep up the good work!
person 123
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!! (cackles madly) MORE!!! MWAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!
person eyes0nme19
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol cant wait till next chapter...keep it up!
person Hiso-chan
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*forgets to breath while gawking*
person SasukeItachiSmex
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
;.;...;.;...How could you leave it there?! You better update soon. >< You had better! This is the first fic of Naruto and Sasuke that I actually like as much as the other one. ^___^ I can't wait to see Sasuke's expression, his reaction, and the way Naruto will make it up to him. >> Even though they really aren't together. But, anyway, goodness...-Pants- Keep it up!! Don't stop writing. ;.;

-Clings for dear life- xD Hey, and check out my story. Just A Kiss, is the title. ^^