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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great april fools! i almost had a heart attack then laughed my ass off. evil cliffie but that's why i love this fic. thanks and keep it up!
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE A HORRIBLE PERSON!!!!! WHY ON EARTH WOULD YOU WRITE SOMETHING LIKE THAT AND JUST END IT THERE!!!! I"M GOING TO DIE NOW!!!!! THANKS A LOT!!! *Throws tantrum* hurry up and update!!!!! d(^-^)b
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! more!!
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! Update! Such a nasty cliffie you wicked wicked person! I love it though! Yeah!
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHH!!!! I can't believe you ended it there!!! You have to update soon!! PLEASE!!!! This is such a good story. Usually, AU stories kinda suck, but you're doing a great job.
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know a song that gets on everybody's nerves,
everybody's nerves, everybody's nerves.
Oh, I know a song that gets on everybody's nerves,
and this is how it goes: Chapter One!
(Hehe sorry couldn’t resist. I was considering doing pages and then chapters. ^_~)
Anyway… let the reviewing begin!!
Well… after reading all these chapters of this story it’s hard to remember the first one. *goes back and skims* Ah, right right. Wonderful beginning, I particularly liked the scene with Naruto and the homework. It was so brilliant… but you already knew that. Hmm, well the potatoes on the pepperoni were nice, but the seventy five muffin men didn’t like crossing the river Jordan because London Bridge is falling down. And besides that, I absolutely love the tension with Neji he puts the pressure on Sasuke right away, which is what we like because of that stupid Ochimaru arc… *erases history* “It never happened people! Nothing to see here.”
Hmm, four more chapters to review so I better get cracking. Just remember to keep your head between your legs and kiss your butt goodbye in the face of danger, and we’ll be good. Well chickens, lets fly!
(Don’t ask… I saw chicken run recently… and… well I am me afterall… We’ll see how these reviews go!)
Love you, and your little dog too! Err… wait a sec…
-Jay-
everybody's nerves, everybody's nerves.
Oh, I know a song that gets on everybody's nerves,
and this is how it goes: Chapter One!
(Hehe sorry couldn’t resist. I was considering doing pages and then chapters. ^_~)
Anyway… let the reviewing begin!!
Well… after reading all these chapters of this story it’s hard to remember the first one. *goes back and skims* Ah, right right. Wonderful beginning, I particularly liked the scene with Naruto and the homework. It was so brilliant… but you already knew that. Hmm, well the potatoes on the pepperoni were nice, but the seventy five muffin men didn’t like crossing the river Jordan because London Bridge is falling down. And besides that, I absolutely love the tension with Neji he puts the pressure on Sasuke right away, which is what we like because of that stupid Ochimaru arc… *erases history* “It never happened people! Nothing to see here.”
Hmm, four more chapters to review so I better get cracking. Just remember to keep your head between your legs and kiss your butt goodbye in the face of danger, and we’ll be good. Well chickens, lets fly!
(Don’t ask… I saw chicken run recently… and… well I am me afterall… We’ll see how these reviews go!)
Love you, and your little dog too! Err… wait a sec…
-Jay-
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bum… buh da dum… bum ba da dum ba da da bum ba da da… ect… rinse wash and repeat
CHAPTER TWO!!!
Oh man… I could killlllll Neji in this chapter. He’s so vile… (Man when did I become such a Sasuke fangirl) *chases after Sasuke and glomps upon catching* Mine!!!! *snarl*
Eh... sorry had a moment
Well I do have to say I love the idea of Neji headbanging at a rock concert *pops on Yellowcard and plays Believe* he’s defiantly got the build for it.
I still have to laugh at Gaara crushing on Naruto as well. At first it doesn’t seem right, but the more you think about it, things just fall into place and you realize he actually liked Naruto from the beginning. I mean… his head does say love afterall… (or was that lonely…? Na it was love, because I say so!) And those attempted murders of Naru… CLEARLY a poorly expressed cry of love, I’m sure that in his mind he thought the message coming across was “Hey you, I’m scared. I’m scared of committing to or even possibly thinking about dating you because you’re that intimidating and impressive.” Wow… cupid strikes again. Good luck hot stuff. Some day you two will be lying in bed, kissing and mutually masturba… err what am I saying! >_<
On to the next chapter!!!!
Love you and yours, now and for-tytwo
-Jay-
CHAPTER TWO!!!
Oh man… I could killlllll Neji in this chapter. He’s so vile… (Man when did I become such a Sasuke fangirl) *chases after Sasuke and glomps upon catching* Mine!!!! *snarl*
Eh... sorry had a moment
Well I do have to say I love the idea of Neji headbanging at a rock concert *pops on Yellowcard and plays Believe* he’s defiantly got the build for it.
I still have to laugh at Gaara crushing on Naruto as well. At first it doesn’t seem right, but the more you think about it, things just fall into place and you realize he actually liked Naruto from the beginning. I mean… his head does say love afterall… (or was that lonely…? Na it was love, because I say so!) And those attempted murders of Naru… CLEARLY a poorly expressed cry of love, I’m sure that in his mind he thought the message coming across was “Hey you, I’m scared. I’m scared of committing to or even possibly thinking about dating you because you’re that intimidating and impressive.” Wow… cupid strikes again. Good luck hot stuff. Some day you two will be lying in bed, kissing and mutually masturba… err what am I saying! >_<
On to the next chapter!!!!
Love you and yours, now and for-tytwo
-Jay-
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the april's fool joke was a good one. for a moment i was in a state of, "Are you @$#&^* kidding me?!?!??!?! Noo!! Poor Sasuke-chan!!" Ahehehe.... uhh...but I recovered and enjoyed the real chapter immensely. it was soooo good!!! I wanted to read more, and more, and more. Heeheee..I can't wait to read the next chapter. Thanks for an awesome update! ^^
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gotta stop calling that hotline…
El capítulo Tres - Aquí soy, escribiendo En español para estar molestando.
El maratón continúa… Tres hecho, dos en ir.
Well enough of that! Pleh.. Spanish! Just to make you suffer. Mwahahah *cackles*
Neji, whom for the duration of this review will be referred to as the condemned, I have a little something to tell you…
KEEP YOUR DAMNED DIRTY LIPS OFF NARUTO YOU MOTHER F****R!!!
*inhales* Ok I feel better now ^_^
Fantastic chapter Dana-chan, or should I say Dana-sama *bows and worships* “I’m not worthy!”
Go yellowcard! Go laudy! Go green socks and pee stained briefs *editor runs in and informs him that it was in fact a sock which stained the briefs* meh…
I think I need to go now… I really want a juicy piece of meat, I could swallow the whole thing in one go. O_o So what was Naruto’s favor going to be to Neji again, I forgot.
Your loyal fan forev…. Hmm? No way!! Emeraldfire8 posted again? Well screw this writer…
now what was I saying?
-Jay-
El capítulo Tres - Aquí soy, escribiendo En español para estar molestando.
El maratón continúa… Tres hecho, dos en ir.
Well enough of that! Pleh.. Spanish! Just to make you suffer. Mwahahah *cackles*
Neji, whom for the duration of this review will be referred to as the condemned, I have a little something to tell you…
KEEP YOUR DAMNED DIRTY LIPS OFF NARUTO YOU MOTHER F****R!!!
*inhales* Ok I feel better now ^_^
Fantastic chapter Dana-chan, or should I say Dana-sama *bows and worships* “I’m not worthy!”
Go yellowcard! Go laudy! Go green socks and pee stained briefs *editor runs in and informs him that it was in fact a sock which stained the briefs* meh…
I think I need to go now… I really want a juicy piece of meat, I could swallow the whole thing in one go. O_o So what was Naruto’s favor going to be to Neji again, I forgot.
Your loyal fan forev…. Hmm? No way!! Emeraldfire8 posted again? Well screw this writer…
now what was I saying?
-Jay-
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhh, gawdammit, i love your writing. 'tis hilarious! and you captured naruto exactly as id imagine him, all grown up and all. everyone's characterizations kickass. anywho, very cool. rawr. want more. <33