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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person animegirl
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn your a nasty person, that aprils fools joke was soooooo NOT funny *no, it really was, lol* i nearly screamed when i thought you'd put naruto and lee together, eewwww. don't ever scare me like that again *sweatdrops*. looks like things are finnally starting to heat up, please tell me that naruto is going to 'console' sasuke *if ya know what i mean, wink wink* after he finds neji kissing his naruto, he's gotta be pretty pissed. i hope you have sasuke and naruto start to come together soon, but keep up the rivalry between sasuke, neji and gaara cause that's what makes this story soooo intresting, god i love you. update soon please *puppy dog eyes*
person Liliath
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GOSH THIS IS JUST CRUEL AND COOL IN ONCE!!!!!!!UPDATE DUDE!!!!!!!!^^
person Ezj
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The only flames I'm going to toss at you are
for the evil cliffie... But I liked it MWAHAHAHA
... I will be pasing waiting impatiently for the
next chapter... =^_^=
person Myuki-chan
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear god. XD
Sasuke's gonna kill someone~ lol
Your little April Fools joke was very cute XDXD I was all, "...ehhh?!" But yes. I always get so excited when I see an update from you. I look forward to your next one~ :)
person Biokinetic
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
brilliant!
I love how you put that little short alternate story at the start of the story, it completely threw me off and I was about to blow up when i saw april fools, and then read further down.
That was hillarious!
*shifty eyes* anyways, i like the whole Gaara being mother hen thing....and Naruto/Neji..it seemed good in the begining...but I just don't think they would make it as a couple. I think Sasuke/Naruto would do MUCH better.
And perhaps even Gaara/Naruto/Sasuke.
O_O
Omg..I will love you forever if you do. You could even make an alternate ending with Sasuke/Naruto/Gaara is you don't want to do it in this story. but please? Pleasepleaplease?
Email me about it plleaaaaseee
person Heather
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you are soooo incredibly evil!!!! i was wanting to cry at the mention of naruto and lee together, but that was a good april fool's day trick. but as usual, another awesome chapter. and dammit!!! i wanna know how sasuke reacts to neji kissing naruto!!! so please update soon!
person Hawk
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh you are too cruel!!! *cry* Man, this is an awesome story and I wanna know what happens not have stupid cliff hangers where I'm half tempted to sit and hit the refreash button until the next chapter appears!! -_- I know, I know, I'm a pathetic... but this story is really good, mostly because the way they seem to be living is so true to how I lived in university, it's awesome. Anyway, keep up the good work... and post again soon! *shakes fist*

~Hawk
person Snnell
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg.. that joke in the beginning.. lol. .. naru with lee?! @.@ *almost choked* and u left me hanging for more.. *sobs*
what's sasuke gonna do?! please update soon~ *looks pleadingly*
person Rachel Dracon
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMNIT! HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT THERE?! Okay, it was great, wonderful, and funny, but still... need... MORE.... Wow, Neji's forceful. Damn, Saskue obviously seemed to take that the wrong way, though I wonder if he heard Naruto telling Neji he had the wrong idea. Anyway, update again soon please!
person Black Hikari
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
>> That was EVIL!! Leaving a cliffhanger! >< Anyways, I would really like lots of NejixNaruto! ^o^ That pairing rocks! ^o^