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(Ch. 5)
*Shoots you in the head* Now that was just plain MEAN!!!
Update now, or no Pocky for you!!^^

I wonder what Sasuke is going to do?

Update as soon as possible! I can't wait to find out.

WHAT THE HELL WOMAN!!!? where is the NaruSasu!!!?!?! what is going on!! i want sasuke to make Naruto jealouse!! muwahahahaha like that Naruto will open his fucking eyes!!!!
okay i am calm now....love your story! the writing is amazing and i can't wait for the next chapter!

OH SHIT. OH SHIT. OH SHIT. lol...YOU SUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH You made That...that...that...that crazy Neji kiss my Naruto!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL I literally screamed "NO!!!!" when Neji was molesting Naruto! (Thank God my suitemate's gone lol) GAHHHHHHH I HATE U! Make Naruto wash his mouth at least 150 times lol..GAHHH I wanna puke...Go to hell Neji lol. (And I like Neji too 0.o; shit...hmmm that's interesting...I hate Sasuke but I only want Sasuke to kiss/touch/molest a WILLING Naruto...but not Neji even though I like him...and definitely not Gaara even though I really like him .... I'm twisted.) And that was a WORSE April Fool's joke than the one me and my friends played on another friend!! GAH!!! My heartbeat went crazy!!! Damn you for being such a good author. But...I'm upset now :( I really wanted Naruto to like push Neji away so that he would fly to the other end of the wall and slide down after banging his head reallyyyy hard...*sighs* What the hell are those muscles for, Naruto-chan!!! GRRR lol :P this is NOT a flame. It's a love-letter to you that criticizes the NejiNaru (barfs) in the fic :'( wai wai waiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii *goes and cries because her beloved fic has a Naruto molester in it*

Alright. I'm sane now :) I love your style. I love the emotions that you are putting in your characters, that despite the AU, the characters seem to be refreshingly real. Naruto's uncanny observance of his surroundings, his being able to delve into things that he loves and ignore everything else, Sasuke's posessiveness (though we haven't seen it in the anime...it's just part of his 'I'm super cool' personality), Neji's desire for freedom (which he found through Naruto both in the anime and in the fic - as described in the recent chapter), and Gaara's 'I will protect you because you saved me' personality. They're real and to me, your fic is showing this side of them that is evident in the actual series but can't always be pinpointed. I hope that you update really soon.

...*wails pathetically* WHY!?!?!?!? Why did Neji have to kiss him?!?!?! Okay, I'm not really that torn up, but it sounded like a good idea at the time. Well anyways, I look forward to your next chapter and I hope we get to see Sasuke work up the nerve to confess and get a good response out of Naruto. I also hope to see some Sasu/Naru action soon, so please update soon, ja!

Hey,
I'm quite smitten with your fic. Although it's slight OOC and AU (just a little), I really liked it. I enjoy the humor the most. I guess it's because the way you mix the orignial plot and characters with the OOC-ness (ex. Neji moshing) =P
when is your next chapter coming out?

Buahahaha. That was hiliarious. Naruto is so adorable when he acts all innocent.

Quite good! I really enjoyed the enclusion of some Holy Grail! My only complaint is that I have difficulty picturing people moshing at a Yellowcard concert o.0

*can now go to sleep happy*

you rock! the fic rocks! the characters rock! i like it!!!! everything rocks!

write more! *too sleepy to comprehend much else now*

but i do know.. that i'll have happy dreams!