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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person Hiso-chan
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aa, Naruto is a clueless as ever. Well, this is my first time reading this and I decided that you really do deserve a review because it's really good. XD I love it to be exact, I've been laughing most of the time and acting like a squealing teenage girl in other parts where Sasuke was well, realizing his attraction. So cute. lol I look forward to updates. ^^
person Rachel Dracon
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beware the Sand Man, heh heh heh... Great chapter! The massage was really nice, andit loosened Sasuke up quite well, which is cool since he seems to have trouble stopping himself from snapping at Naruto. I wonder what Neji's gonna try next, and if Gaara will try something more than just working out with him. Also, that 350 pounds thing was trippy, yo. Anyway, it was awesome, update again soon! ^.^
person Demon
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GOD DAMMIT UPDATE DAMN YOU, YOU HAVE ME ADDICTED!!!!
person Kori Nibiki
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::laughs:: Awesome! Another great chapter! Keep up the excellent work. Ja!
person Snnell
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*waiting for the sand man already* ^^
person Hitomi
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Ch. 4)
Hmm.. I remember reading another Naruto fanfiction detailing Naruto's Tsunade-inherited massuaging skills. Anyways, it was wonderful to "watch" Sasuke turn into a puddle of goo, and then watch Naruto go and "burn off" some steam. XDD
Garaa teh Jealous Sand Man! XDD Not only Neji as a rival, but also Sasuke?! Boy, that fox-kid's got a lot of bishonen after him. XDD

I was just *dying* to see Naruto and Sasuke kiss! GYYYAAA!! I NEED more!!

Update soon, or I WILL unleash my fangirl-lish wrath!! Moah Hahahaha! XDD

Until teh next,
Ja ne~
person evil
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oo!! Naruto's smarter than he looks!! He can make Sasuke turn into a puddle of goo just by using his 'fingers'! And he can lift that much?? I can't lift anything heavier than my little sister... O.o;; *Sweat Drops* Uhm... Heheheh... I love your story! Update soon!! *Glomps*
person ice
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmm... This story is still a SasuNaru-fic?
person Catleya
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Moore Please!!! I just love this... Pretty please update ASP Arigatou!
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh god, this is getting yummier by the minute! this fic manages to take a common plot device and make it into something exceptional and very well-written to boot. but i have to say, the evil cliffies you manage to thread through the whole thing is pure unadulterated EVIL! *lol* but, the cliffies seems to make people come back for more... so that works out fine...

i can't wait to see what form of torment naruto has in store for sasuke (damn, tease!naruto is soooooo smokin' hot! *fangirls*) and how the third suitor gaara plays into all of this. i do hope to see more action involving gaara, since so far he's relegated to gym-related scenes. now, if he were to suddenly start hanging about naruto out of gym and start to piss of sasuke and neji, it'll be a veritable warzone.

i have to say, the deviousness of naruto is delicious, and quite a change of pace. plus i am curious if any of the girls will be making an appearance (not that it matters to my yaoi-obsessed mind) but i can't help wonder about it though...

i'm looking forward to the next chapter.