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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person fan
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I love it, I love it, I love it!!! Naruto and Sausuke are just so FUN... I'm a little worried about Gaara and Neji, though. LOL- maybe you can pair them up, and they can console each other when Naruto and Sausuke shack up together. Which, hopefully, will be soon. Yay!!!
person animegirl
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was sooooooo freakin funny!! this is the best story ever, YOU MUST CONTINUE TO UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!!!!!!! i can't wait to see what happens next, it's getting extremly intresting, and that back rub naruto gave sasuke was freakin HOT!
person -
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I.Love.This.Fic. YAY!!!!!!! lol ^^ Suchhhhhhh a good good good good chapter *kicks Gaara out of the picture* Get away from MY Naruto-chan..hehehehehe ^^ alright lol DAMN ^^ WHOO-HOO!!! That was SO good lol ^^ "were you letting out some steam" lmao ^^ WAIIII I am so excited over this chapter, damnit. Alright, :) Good chapter, great flow, great emotion... I almost wish that Sasuke had gone to the gym...I want it to be kind of equal between the two ya know...like, I don't want Naruto to be all muscle and Sasuke to be sickly 0.o LOL :) But but but Naruto-kun looks so hot in my imagination *goes starry-eyed*
Great characterization concerning Gaara... I mean, it was just really great the way you make his character so analyzing and stuff. I also like how both times (1st when talking abt Neji taking Naruto the concert, 2nd when talking about Sasuke) Gaara stood up and said that he has work to do. lol ^^ You have great writing style and I admire you for writing so great and updating quick! (quicker than other authors ;) if it were up to me, i'd have everyone writing chapters every hr .. heck, make your characters REALLY come to life -- not just in the words! lol )

Great work.
person Yukiko
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwww, I don't know if I should pity Naruto right now. He'll have so much fun...
person Dead Uchiha
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!!!!!!!! d(^_^)b

Okaaaay...now for some more? Pretty please?
person AtsumiHaruko
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The funniest story I've read in a looong time! You rock! I wonder how it'll all turn out for our cuties and I'm so looking forward for the next chapter. ^_^
person kweh21
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is absolutely great! i so love your humor. especially when sasuke caressed the washer and chuckled evily. hahah that was great. keep up to great work and i'll be looking forward to the next chap.
person Liliath
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
COOL!!!!AND REALLY AWESOME CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!UPDATE~~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!^^
person Myuki-chan
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh Gaara's getting involved now~ XD
Sasuke better watch out lol He's so adorable. Especially during that massage part :D
Can't wait for the next chapter~
person Anon^^
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn Naruto is one hot piece on the market right now apparently. I wouldn't mind having Neji or Sasuke after me, but Gaara is just a little too freaky for me. Well this has most certainly turned into an interesting story, and I'm glad i've found it. Not many(if any) spelling or grammar mistakes that i spotted. You flow smoothely from one paragraph to the next, and you describe scenery well-enough to get a decent picture anyway. I like your descriptions of your people the best though-their facial expressions or thoughts is nice. Good job and keep up the good work. Ciao!