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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person ST
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ah. poor naruto, doesn't even know that he has three boys chasing after him.
person esca
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE DONT TELL ME THIS IS NEJIXNARU PLEASE ANYWAY CONTINUE WITH YOUR WORK
person Anon
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can't help but wonder if maybe the Titles should have been "Chasing Sasuke" and "Breaking Naruto". Just seems to make more sense...
person silent laugh
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ugh......Yellowcard........I hate em
person tsuy
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So GARAA like naruto too? *cackles* tehehe... this just keeps getting better and better. And I *WILL* ignore the fact that it is probably going to be Neji X Garaa.
person -
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mannn!!! This story sure is fun to read ^^ LOL alright, awesome job...but beware! i might end up haunting u if neji or gaara even TOUCH Naruto in that way :@ :@ :@ :@ :@ ...and...I hate Sasuke too lol but...*smiles softly at Naruto* since Naruto-sama likes him very much...I'll spare him this time... *glares at Sasuke* HURRY UP AND DO SOMETHING BEFORE NEJI AND GAARA TAKE AWAY MY INNOCENT NARUTO! waiii :D yosh! update soon!!!
person Cho
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Please update soon!!! <3
person angel ran
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, the plot thickens!! ^^ Another of Naruto's admirers has been revealed, hehe..that bit with Gaara was hilarious, the calmly-walking-away bit followed by nosebleed XD LOL, and Naruto isn't picking up on any of it...o.O *chucks (mostly) blunt objects at him* And Sasuke's reaction in the library was also eeexcellent...both to Naruto's near-molestage, and Neji's invite!! How can Naruto now see it?!?! =__= i guess he is just really oblivious...either that, or in total denial, ^^
Hopefully he'll pick up on it soon!! Can't wait to see how else the plot goes from here....^_____^ Great fic, TONS of fun to read!!!!!!!! *heart*
person Alie
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it love it love it! I always wanted to read about this kind of scenario, and I think your writing is great! It's just how I pictured their rivalry - can't wait til the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
person macy
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahahaha...awesome. Gaara's thrown in the mess too huh? Hehehe...oblivious Naruto's so cute! I really like how you write. Happily waiting for more ^^