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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved that it was a long chappy and please update soon! i love this story ^.^
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great chapter! I'd love to read more! Hope you'll update soon!
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice start ^^ i'm looking forward to the next chapters!
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First Neji ... next Gaara I hope ... muahahaha, can't wait to see the next chapter
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wonder could the rival possibly be neji!??!?!?!?! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! i want to see sasuke's jealousy flare since he didn't take the chance to get naruto SOMEONE ELSE DOES!!!! mwahahhaa but all in all it was a nice long chapter!!! may the next one be jucier and just as long!!! Keep up the good work!!
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT, love it, love it. You are an amazing writer, and I've really become fond of anything you put your name on. I'm wondering if this is the story you suggested before? I hope that it is. Anyway. I'm enjoying the story and am *begging* you to continue. I can't wait to see how Naruto makes him squim.
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
CutecutecutecutecutecuteCUTE!!
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I SO sense jealouy ^.~
Update soon!!
>.<
I SO sense jealouy ^.~
Update soon!!
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cute story. I can't wait to see what you will do with the story line.
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was nice. Good long chapter too! I like the way you write, and how you didn't jump right into, 'oh! It must be that I love him!' Great job, and I can't wait for more! ^.^
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
youy so have to update i cant wait to see your update!!! your story line is great whoo i'm the 10th reviwer ^.^