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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person Okii_tako
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I nearly cried when I saw I had an update e-mail!!!!! I was sooo happy, and it was well worth the wait! Can't wait to read the next chapter~thingy...!!

I would love to know when you do another story, so could you add my e-mail to your list? It would be awsome!
person Anon
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heeee...that really made my night. I was soooo sad earlier this evening, but this fic effectively lifted my spirits! thank you so much. i loved the opening lines that Sasuke was thinking before he knocked on Naruto's door. Those were so funny! Loved the ghostbusters scene as well. Purely original and creative! It definitely caught me by surprised and had me laughing like a weirdo in front of the screen. I'm both happy and sad that i've reached the final chapter! Of course, sad because this means no more chasing naruto (except for the epilogue), and happy because the two boys finally got together. Heee..thanks for the wonderful update! I love this fic to bits =D
person macy
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oopsie..forgot to put my name..that was me BTW
person Mochi~
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*is all warm and fuzzy inside* IloveyouIloveyouIloveyou. I LOVE YOU.
person cateye91
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooooooo!!!!!! narusasu 4 frikin ever!!!!!! lol...but u need 2 write more!!!!!! U MUST OR I SHALL DIIIIIE!! lol...i'll hunt u down and i'll force u 2 write some more and then u shall die!! lol...u need 2 write the part when naru and sasu do...stufsz...u know, the things that come after the whole kissing...yeah...so write! whenever u have spare time, i command u 2 write!!! ^_^
person Briryan
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!) Can't wait to read about the party. Should be a good one. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
person Kenz
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you finally updated!
yay and it was good non teh less and even
the humor in this chapter was awsomo!
person lucky1
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Question..will we have the pleasure/honor to see these two boys engage in some hot passionate romp? Aka will there be a lemon for this story and find out exactly who wears the pants in the relationship?
person ky0kichi
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow..

Just..WOW!!

That was a GREAT chapter! I love how you did it! It was contstructed PERFECTLY!! -tears in eyes- Beautiful.... !!!$!@$@!

I love how you had it angry and angsty at first... Then it was all..Just..RAH! This made my day. Oh man -flails with happiness- This is such a good fic, I tell you!!! Man. I can't wait to see what Naruto has in mind. :3 Great job!
person lucky1
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Question..will we have the pleasure/honor to see these two boys engage in some hot passionate romp? Aka will there be a lemon for this story and find out exactly who wears the pants in the relationship?