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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person Rachael
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Between elmos with uzis and angsting over ass, I'm so happy with your turns of phrases and witty dialogue that I think that my insides might melt. I remember you mentioning sending out an e-mail to your fans when you update. Could you add me to that list? (not that there's anything wrong with driving to the nearest library everyday and checking your profile at least five times each hour to see if you updated...but I am supposed to have a life...*sigh*)

I am, as always, enraptured by your writing style. Your cliffhangers are tasteful and dramatically succint and I appreciate your talent to no end. And I was just tickled pink when you acknowledged that neither of the boys had shut the door. I had began to fear that you'd forgotten!
person TeenBulma
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg! i SO cant wait for the next chapter! XD This story i so damn good, that whenever you update im always like 'OMG OMG OMG SHE UPDATED' and my friends are all like 'OMG NO WAY!' and then im like 'HELLZ YEAH' and then we all read and then talk about it when were done. Haha were such nerds, but all because your an amazing writer! <3
person TaiyChan
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Awesome job!

Loved the humor too, very smart and funny. So, Sasuke and Naruto finally get together, WHOOHOOO!!!

So, just how is Naruto going to sweep Sasuke off his feet?

Update soon, okay?
person RyuichiSakuma2
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter. xD Keep going. <3

-Ryu
person lo
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Finally the feelings come out. And that whole agnsting thing was hillarious!!! This was just great!!!!
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Almost finished...and soon, Naruto's little secret shall be revealed!! ^_^
person ghostninja85
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm back, four more to go. more in depth review once i've finished everything
person ghostninja85
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So, the other other shoe's finally dropped. Hopefully we'll get a real confession out of the three of them and nothing too drastic will occur.

I loved it, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
person nicole
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'll die and/or kill u if u don't finish this
person neversweet
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!! i luv this fic. ~_^ keep up the good work