rate_review Reviews

After staying up till practically 2 in the morning to finish this fiction I thought I had to review your story. It would be criminal not too. I had been contemplating making an account of here anyways so now is as good a time as any. Anyways, to the point. First I must praise your writting style. It has to be my favourite, I've never read something so completely captivating in my life. Not even joking you. I can't remember when I started this fiction earlier today but I've hardly left the computer all day since I finally had a day off work and could.

Every chapter drew me along until this last one where I have been forced to stop and have finally realized I am feeling more tired then I realized. This is the best Naruto/ Sasuke fanfiction I have read and look foreward to reading the final chapters of your epic adventure here. You've deserved every hit, and every reveiw.

~Morbid Emo

Oh, that was a nasty cliffhanger there!

*grins evilly* Oooh, now that's a good ending. You go get 'em, Naruto. Make 'em sweat.

Kepp up the great work and good luck on the nomination!

great! update!


alright, j/k i would never do that to a poor author ^^. however, other than grammatical errors & slight OOc-ness here & there (of course it -is- an AU with yaoi, thats to be expected) i see virtually no flaws. other than driving poor readers insane by not telling us what naruto is growing...or whatever he's doing...& cliffhangers. i dont like cliffhangers much myself, but if i dont get one the story often doesnt hold my interest (not that it'd be possible for me to lose interest in this anyway).
i love AU stories, and what you've done with the characters to keep them true to the storyline, but it seems neji's gonna be alright in the end, but what about gaara? the only person he seems to like at all is naruto... please dont leave poor gaara all alone! *gives cookies for good story & promises more if gaara gets a happy ending too*

YOU ARE ONE OF THE MOST F***ING BRILLANT WRITER EVER. Talk about sending a person through a loop. Every chapter I'm biting my nail off
wondering if your going to change ur mind and have Naruto end up with some one else. Yeah you keep saying it's NxS but come
of the interaction between N and the others is so hot that it makes you wonder. Anyways update soon before I drive myself crazy
And if you haven't figured it out yet I FRIGING LOVE THIS STORY.

Yarr, the inevitable has happened! Naruto found out about the bet! What's going to happen to our hero(es) next?! :dies:

That being said, I love this chapter. ^_^ Naruto's journal writing epiphany, Sasuke's photo album, the memory from Sasuke trying to kill himself, and Tenten and Neji's little exchange.. Great stuff. ^_^ I cannot wait until your next update! I want to see what happens, and where Naruto was going for a few hours.. and how the hell DID Gaara get Sasuke's cell number? O_o

plz hurry and write...this is one of the best stories i have read. you are a beautiful writing so plz keep on writing and hurry.

That was so sweet! I loved it! Poor Sasuke and Naruto! I have this strange eerie feeling they will be getting back together but Orochimaru will play some part in that. Oh well. It was quite good and I enjoyed it very much. Keep going.

AH. AHHHH.
Naruto's had an epiphany? :D Oooh I can't wait to find out what happens now. The bet is finally revealed. XD

Oh, and Merry Christmas! <3

Ooh. Burn.

Why does Sasuke have to be like that? (at the end, I mean.) He was so perfect, so great...why would he sneer? Why would he say that again? *headdesk* So *headdesk* stupid *headdesk* Sasuke... *headdesk*