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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person Elk
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another dramatic and awesome cliffhanger! Can't wait to see how everyone's expressions would be at the next chapter, youve really putting all of your best in the finale of this fic! Sou... Congratulations on receiving the award ^^, you definitely deserved them since it it one of the best orginal Naruto fics I've read from other websites.

I'm surprised you'll allow Maruto to discover the bet from those three, but I guess he'll bound to discover it soon. Your way with words is amazing and I hope you'll continue to write Naruto fics in the future. I'll also definitely see you original male/male fanfic and review it too. ^^ Keep up the wonderful work and writing skills! Til then!

-Elk
person Terry
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's time to pay NARUTO up! Finally he finds out, so glad. Happy Holidays and thanks for the update.
person kuroi-saukrapetals
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jesus Christ! Suspense!! Lord have mercy on my soul. I'm happy that Naruto figured out his feelings but to find out that your the subject of a bet, thats not really great is it! I'm so happy to see an update from you and reading it on Chrisymas day...its like you sent me a present! Can't wait for the next chapters!!
person cateye91
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
..........i hate you...no, seriously, i *really* do hate you...hooow caan uuu just leaave it theere!?!?!? waaaaah! i finally realize that u've added another awesome chapter and i get to the bottom of the screen and i'm bout to flip out cuz naru knows bout the bet and then i go 2 read some more...and there's nothing...i'm like 'what the fuck is wrong with this goddamned story?! there aren't supposed 2 be evil cliffies!!' i wonder how many ppl killed some1 cuz they saw that cliffy...that's just evil, man...it's just wrong...so! i command u 2 write another chapter! get off ur lazy ass (dunno if ur lazy but oh well...lol) and write another chapter!! go write till ur hand is so cramped that it's unable 2 move!!! lol...but i need another chapter! it's like...air to me! it's what i thrive on and when u leave cliffies like that i can't do anything but stare at the computer and think 'fuck...' lol...so write! WRITE DAMNIT! lol...^_^
person The Empress
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*vein pops out of head* How could you? How could you leave me hanging like that. I almost backhanded my brother for interrupting my reading of this chapter and you leave me hanging?! *sighs and calms down and then trembles with exitement* I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. I bet Naruto's going to seriously blow the fuck up. *evil snicker* Oh Hell Yes! Whooo! I will be anxiously waiting for the next chapter. Please update REAL soon. =)
person cibiboy
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story iv been waiting for a moment like the one with all of them Gara+Nij+Sas+Naru i wonder if naruto going to be pissied like Sakura was about when her boyfr beted her well i cant wait till ur next update.
Merry X-Mas
person yoko
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story update soon and remember Sas still has to tell naruto he loves him
person KimmehKimKim
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAWWWWWWWWWWWWGH. I HATE YOU! HATE YOU! That was MEANEST CLIFFY. *cries in a corner*

I've been following your story since chapter 3 and that by far has to be the WORSE thing you've done. Evil evil evil woman! *whine*
person Ryuko
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*bouncing with glee* W00t!!!!! ^___________^ I love it when you update. It makes my day so much better, really. Granted, I couldn't review on the same day as I read it, but I'm still feeling the after affects, so it still counts. :P
I couldn't wait for this chap. I simply had to had to know how Naruto planned on dealing with the whole mess. And and and...o.o Suicidal Sasuke? (XD Sounds like a doll. "Hi, I'm Suicidal Saucegay Barbie!") I dunno why, but the image I had of him in my head made me wanna give him a hug. Figures he'd pick hara-kiri instead of something...less violent.
I find it hilarious that even after all of that, Sasuke is still trying to make himself believe that Naruto isn't important to him. And the photo thing? That was just creepy. Really, really cool, but creepy.
I'm still wondering about how you plan to have Naruto react to finding out about the bet. I hope Sasu-chan doesn't get punched again. One bruise is enough, ne? ^^
P.S. I saw Franz Ferdinand's 'Take Me Out' video for only the second time last week. Despite having heard the song a couple times before I started reading this fic, I hadn't heard it since. It has now taken on a new significance. I couldn't stop grinning the entire time I watched the video, nor could I get the image of a gussed up Naruto dancing on stage out of my head. Fics like yours should come with warning labels, such as: READERS BE WARNED. THE FOLLOWING WILL AFFECT YOUR BRAIN IN MYSTERIOUS WAYS. Yeah...something like that. ^^;
person Emmy
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The first thing that really interested me about this fic was the astounding amount of reviews. Now that i've read through to the latest chapter, i'm not even a little suprised to see all the positive responses. Each is well deserved, as this has to be the best naruxsasu fic i've read in a while. I love it, and I love how you added the other two as competition, eventhough it sometimes makes me angry that it's not clear what Naruto is thinking, I enjoy seeing things from the others point of view. It makes for the perfect amount of mystery, not laying everything out on the table, letting the readers come to our own mini-conclusions along the way about what each character is thinking at a particular moment, it makes reading that much more entertaining.

Of course, I would just love to see a little more from Naruto's POV, but as long as someone shuts gaara the hell up, i'll be happy!