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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person skye
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nooo! you meanie! why cliffie?! this is pure torture, so update soon,please! ok? OK? (I'M DESPERATE)
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ouch. they're in for something. update!
person 123
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Sasuke, you idiot. *smacks him with pan* I await Naruto's outburst.

Haha, the ugly truth had to come out eventually didn't it? *has faith in a happy ending*

Excellent. I love your small emphasis on Sasuke's Japanese heritage (as far as your AU goes, him being the only one with that...you know what I mean).
person Manda-Kun
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whooooooo! Catch in the act, what ya gonna so now boys? xD Ahh, makes me giggle. And Tenten&Neji normaly creep me out, but I think there sweet in this fanfic. This is Soooo-oh-oh like my favorite. xD I'm upset that's it gonna end soon, but also happy, cause then I can finally have a favorite fanfiction that is complete. xD >.> Er wait. I second one. xD I don't know, just everyone will be all happy with nor cliffhangers when it's done! Your brilliant! <3
person n
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
person Lili
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, that's certainly a kick in the sack for the three betting lover boys. Glad it happened though. Naruto had the right to know about schemes against him, ne?
person Okii_tako
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaaahhhhhhhhhhh!!! Not fair!!!

I'm glad you updated, even though it took a while. I understand exams can suck. bad.

I already voted for you for the two things. Hope you win, and I can't wait till you update again!
person lo
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it. I like the history you are creating between the characters. I also like your dialog, it is very entertaining. You do a great job with character interaction. Keep up the good work.
person Ann
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo, the plot thickens, ish so happy you updated, please another chapter soon this one was good, tempting is what it was...more please ^.^
person ky0kichi
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AH! NOOOOOO!

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