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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person BrokenHearted
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love your story specially this one even though i dont review but i always vote, this is my first review for your story. i will vote for you in any category hehe anything for you (thingking if i gonna do anything for you HAHA *evil smile*) anyway i'll read your chapter 22 now BYE BYE till next time! (i'll support anything you do *stories only!*)

Q- do you think i'm heart broken? haha anyway i really am your story makes me smile THANKS!
person Kenz
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh BUSTED!
Please continue asap.
person Mina Harker
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh! CLIFFHANGER! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I need.... medical... assistance ....
person Herme23
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Just read chapter 22 and it was so awesome. It's so sad that they're fighting, but what's love without a little war? Anyways, I love this and eagerly await it's ending, and also I tried to vote for you, but for some reason, I couldn't. It won't let me. In any case, I hope you win because this story really does deserve it, and if you write an original I will most definitely check it out. Yours Herme
person TaiyChan
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh... Things are not looking good for Sasuke... Not at all!!! What will happen next!! update soon! PLEASE!
person diamond_princess2006
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how did i know this was gonna happen? well so much for sasuke being forgiven... anyway i'm just loving this please continue !
person Vibribi
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ZOMGNARUTOGYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA-

I'm going to interrupt my brains screaming to say this, I believe this is all Sasuke's fault. No no no, not the bet or the other nonsense, but the Naruto showing up at inopportune times. Naruto seems to have a Sasuke-dar so where ever Sasuke goes, Naruto will find him. So yes. Sasuke, hit yourself lightly on the head for forgetting the Sasuke tracking system, then turn tail and run like your fangirls are after you with ropes and a human sized bird cage before Naruto goes crazy and beats your a**. Right.

-AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaljuagduksayfdurgukjydf 0_+!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You'll update soon though, right? Right ::wibbles::??
person snarse
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! *runs around happily* It's like crack... and I'm addicted!
person Vox
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh... Poor boys, put on the spot! I'm gonna be ssso sad when this fic is finished *sniff*. but I guess I'll get over it. thank you for an excellent chapter!
person liankitty
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. I hadn't even thought of the trouble that Sasuke, Gaara and Neji would get into when Naruto found out about the bet. He's already mad at all of them (for good reason) so I hope they get an ass-whooping! And Sasuke... man, he's being a complete jerk; as if calling his love interest a whore isn't bad enough, he denying he's done anything wrong (well, he knows he has, he's just being stubborn). I'd have to be feeling really altruistic to forgive someone for saying something like that, especially in that context.
As usual, an awesome chapter! Thanks for writing!