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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person Ruby
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't give praise easily, but you have definitly earned it. Your story is one of a select few actually created in a modern time and made believable. Bravo. Also, the writing is engaging and entertaining. I'm looking forward to reading this story 'til the end.
person Kassie
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story (so far). I've laughed far more than I thought possible. Great job! I think I'll take the time to read your other stories also.
person Kei
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...your fic....is absolutely amazing! n.n I love your writing style and the plot is to die for! T.T I almost cried at the end of chapter 20.... OxO I hope you write more soon! ( ._. I hope this isn't too short, but your fic leaves me speechless)
person sky
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is getting better and better every time I read it!! Can't wait to read what happpens next, Update soon!!!
person Kelly
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg... I hope itz gonna be a happy ending... Btw, I thought you said that there would be a narusasu smut... Hahahaha.. Would it be in the last chapter???? I hope so ne! Ganbade no tsuki no episode!!! Keep up the good work, I love your fanfiction...
person Myuki-chan
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Curse the pains of switching internet companies. Or else I probably would have read this on the day you updated.
It must have been fun writing Neji's little hallucinations. :D Poor guy... any chance of him hooking up with TenTen?
And Sasuke. Dear Sasuke. You are such an angsty little boy. Itachi turned the stove on, didn't he?! XD

I need to get on Y!M more often. I miss yoooou~
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o....m...g... you are amazing!! omg, i love your writing. i can't wait to know what happens!! lol, neji got drunk.

~Okami
person Elk
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have no idea how much my heart is in pain now after reading this single chapter... Demo....2 chapters left!? *cries* I was hoping there'll be at least 5 or 6 left, and then an epilogue... Excellent chapter, though I thought Naruto would say about the deal he and Neji had, would say yes, that he'll go be with him ><.

Ah well, a reader can't get everything that she/he wants... And Sasuke, nice way to carefully plan about his family's death, now it just made me feel even more sorry for him since he's mostly the one suffering.... Yep, I'd like to see how this would turn out at the end Author-sama, you're the best! Til we meet again on the next chapter!

-Elk
person kuroi-sakurapetals
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if i left a review before for this story but god damnit it's frickin' good!! When Sasuke called Naruto a whore! Lord have mercy on my soul, i wanted to kill him. I see you're getting into Sasuke's past now. I'm glad about that. Please do keep up the great work and oh before i forget, that part with Neji and the leeches!! Lord you were trying to kill me weren't u? well keep it up!! see u next chapter
person Emily
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, awesome writing! I almost never continue reading a fic if there isn't any action between the pairing being written within the first 3 or 4 chapters, but I have just read this entire thing, where they don't 'officially' hook up until chapter 20, in one sitting.

I was SO HAPPY when Sasuke finally threw Naruto against that tree and kissed him, and then you took it all away from me! Ah, but I know things will get resolved. Naruto completely deserved it, he was leading all of them on. I really enjoy your writing style, the element of suspense really keeps me reading. Though it is kind of getting annoying that every time one of them starts to admit something, they get interrupted. Again. And again. Honestly, that's my only complaint. I love the story, the AU is done very well; the situations are realistic. I LOVED when Naruto took Sasuke home with him, that was such a way to develop their relationship, and Sasuke being terrified of horses was hilarious. Oh, and you wrote the scene where Naruto molests Sasuke in his sleep /so/ well. I was DYING from the sexual tension.