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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person MorbidHarpy
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omfg... that chapter was so sad!! poor neji san!!! omfg.. I hope hes not to upset about it..
. and oh god... Naruto and sasuke better work this out.. that last chapter made me cry!!
(they all do tho XO) god damn.. your such an amazing writer!!! *clings* have my babies!!
XOOO!!! god.. that fic is so freaking sad and amazing.. please update soon!!! XOOOO <3
I love it and you so much! lol!!!
person Tina
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nuuuuuu!!!!! WHY?!! Damn it everything was going just fine untiil Sasuke has to snap right there!!
YOU BASTARD SASUKE, DO YOU EVEN KNOW WHAT YOU'RE DOING TO ME???!!!!


Okay, now that i got all those anger out of me. You are really confusing me. I mean one mintue
Sasuke is saying he would die for Naruto, and another minute later, Sasuke is calling Naruto a
whore!! WTF??!! I'm glad Naruto didn't make a move on Neji, but instead telling him that he has
no chance with him. Because if Naruto did make a move on Neji, then Sasuke whould be right
about Naruto.Then i'd start hating Naruto, but then i'll get over it becasue hey, who can stay mad at
Naruto? I can't really blame it all to Sasuke for ruining the chance that he had to be with Naruto. I
would probably be as frustrated as Sasuke if the guy that i like is giving you all kinds of mixed
signals to me. But still, I still kinda blame Sasuke because if he would just listen to what Naruto
was going to say, then he wouldn't have to snap at Naruto!GAWD! This fic is sooo awesome!! One
mintue you think you know what the story is going to end like, then something so twisted that it
makes you so confused and frustrated that it makes you want to go on a killing spree. You're fic
is awesome and please update soon. Congratulation on getting more than 1,000 reviews. You
deserve it more than any body else.

~Tina
person Pauline
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can honestly say that I don't know where to start. But damn you're a good writer. I absolutely LOVE this strory, can't stop thinking about what's going to happen to them, I'm looking forward to the next chapter to be published. Must say that I love the way you have captured the personalities in every character, you have given them life and emotions. It's so well written, it's brilliant if I can say so. Don't ever stop writing, u have a gift out of this world :)

Ooh and another thing, I would be so happy and forever grateful if you could send me a short note or something when the next chapter is published :) My E-mail is: pauline_facht@hotmail.com

Take care & best wishes
Pauline from sweden :)
person ky0kichi
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wafhdsgEAdgfjdag1!@!

EEEP! Do you have any idea how much I've been anticipating your next update?! ^_^ This made my weekend!! Eeeghergt! And Naruto finally decides to end it between him and neji O.o What about Gaara? Is he gonna do the same?

and Sasuke..

I hope He isn't really too mad at Sasuke. he's got to understand at least a little..I mean he WAS just about leading them all in circles >.>!!

Naruto doesn't know about Sasuke's past, right? o.o!! Sounds angsty to me. I'm wondering what this little "episode" they're speaking of is. And is Sasuke gonna have another one?! That would be interesting >.>!

Gah! anyway! I can't wait to read the next chapter. This is so great. -loves angst and suspense and..Just your fic in general.-
person Kureno
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn You! Why did you have to start Chasing Naruto again when I only have one month of internet left! To make it worse its become so interesting! Twin tears of sorrow are bursting forth! I want to keep reading! ;-;
person Naru
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First of all, to anon... PLEASE. No part of this fic I've read was stolen and I'd like to see what all you're talkign about : /. If your going to write pointless unconstructive remarks like that at least have the _balls_ to write your name and email. Completely unnecessary and you should be ashamed =_=.

Phew. :). Sorry sorry. I'm all about constructive critisim but when someone is that much of a jerk with no reason to be seen....
Now that I've vented at that person.... ods;ufhaourhiugrk;dlfjbSASUKE ;O;! You poor miserable kitten thing. And Naruto... finally! Thank you, yes!
He told Neji that it wouldn't work out. He really should have done that in the beginning though so Neji wouldn't feel twelve kinds of fool now. Same with Gaara. But, myah... I still love Naruto. Boya, go chat with Kiba and get drunk and feel temporary elation(unless your a sad drunk or a sleepy drunk like me :O) and then... reflect. And, Sasuke... QUIT YOUR JOB BEFORE MOLESTATION HAPPENS GYAAAARG. Or, like... like.... get someone to comfo....t... you.... um.... go buy a big yellow teddy and snuggle with it with a bag of non-salted pretzels... and then reflect... some more.... since you reflected anyway. *goes away to make Orochimaru voodoo dolls and wards for Sasuke*
person ladygizarme
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, so it was ecstasy in neji's drink.. daaaaamn dude.... yay for romeo-naruto saving him *sigh* ..at least naruto finally told neji to give up, but aww poor neji, esp after a night like that... and then a look into sasuke's past and how naruto affected *him* ...waaaaahh how's he gonna make up with naruto??? *cries* i can't believe this story's almost over... i don't want it to end!!! i can't wait for the next chapter though, nevertheless lol
person Kigen
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG I feel sorry for Sasuke and that orochimaru, he's such a perv! I hope that Naruto and Sasuke will kiss and make up ;_;
person Germaine(2 lazy 2 sign in)
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, that's a good ending....but how will you patch things up between them hm?

Can't wait for the next chapter!

hugs n'love

Germaine
person Qem
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, I can't help but wonder if perhaps Aniki set it up to fake his death or something along those lines, similar to the anime/manga.


I'm glad Neji is okay. ^_^