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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
jeezus lets get to the good part hoharhohar
update!!!
update!!!
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The latest chapter was intense! Throughout the whole fic I was wondering how long it'd take Sasuke before he did something stupid and possibly irreperable. Thankyou for writing this incredibly cool fic; I've really been enjoying Naruto's cheekiness and the altogether too clumsy attempts of his admirers to catch his attention.
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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*cries* Well, it was good, but in a bad way...Good as in I'm glad they finally had confrontation, and bad as in it made my heart ache, which actually is a sign of good writing...ach, don't listen to me. This is my favorite chapter yet. But I can't wait for the next chapter now. I can't wait to see how torn Naruto will be without Sasuke, and if Sasuke goes into some sort of coma-like attitude without Naruto, not becoming more angry but become empty...his entire being a void...GAH I NEED TO READ IT.
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*cries* Well, it was good, but in a bad way...Good as in I'm glad they finally had confrontation, and bad as in it made my heart ache, which actually is a sign of good writing...ach, don't listen to me. This is my favorite chapter yet. But I can't wait for the next chapter now. I can't wait to see how torn Naruto will be without Sasuke, and if Sasuke goes into some sort of coma-like attitude without Naruto, not becoming more angry but become empty...his entire being a void...GAH I NEED TO READ IT.
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG.... I can't believe you did that. They finally get together and then you tear them apart. I don't know if I'm angry or sad, either way, it's still amazing writing.
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is one of the best fanfics I've read . . . ever! You do an amazing job of keeping the characters in character and really allowing us to see what they are each thinking. I love all the twists and turns and I LOVE how well you put animated-12-year-old ninjas into a college life style. It's so perfect! I have nothing but praise for this piece: it's intriging and complicated, yet simple and understandable; it's involving and emotional (I was SO cheering for Sasuke to make his move! Glad he FINALLY did! oh yeah and go Neji-Tenten!) and at times . . . so hott! Oh yeah! The only thing I have to complain about is my impatience for the next chapter to come out, hehehee. But Naruto and Sasuke CAN'T fight, not now! Not right after they FINALLY did something and admitted it! Quick! Don't let him get away! Run after him! Appologize! DO SOMETHING!!! *ahem* sorry.... So in conclusion, this is amazing! It makes my day every time I see a new chapter posted, and don't you want to make my day? *wink*wink*
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. sasuke and naruto are idiots. complete and utter fucking idiots. BOTH of them. puh-lease take them out of their misery and either get them back together or shoot them. seriously, i'm not joking.
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg this is such a great piece of work. I really hope you keep this going for a while. You have a huge talent for writing. I'm so depressed now that i've chapter 20, so you have to update soon so that I can be a happy person again, lol. Anyways I look forward to seeing more of your writing.
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ya know, i'm about sick of naruto and his games. at this point, i'm not even sure i want to continue reading. i'm sure i probably will, just to see how the situation is resolved. but my god! while i know naruto was going to "confess" something to sasuke, what exactly was he going to say? i like you sasuke? i'm attracted to you? well...duh. sasuke knows that. at this point, it seems that naruto and sasuke don't feel the same for each other. honestly, it just seems like their lusting after the other. there's nothing wrong with that, but it just seems like sasuke's gonna end up getting the raw end of the deal. it's obvious sasuke is in love with naruto, but so far, there doesn't seem to be any indication that naruto might feel that way too. sure he cares for his friend, and he's attracted to him. but love? seems a little sketchy to me. i know sasuke tends to overreact at times, but i really can't blame him. if i was always seeing the person i like/love/lust after (yadda, yadda, yadda) having his "groupies" surrounding him, it would get a little frustrating. but then to have those same people always butting in (when they're not needed!), it's no wonder that sasuke finally blew up. what he said was hurtful, no doubt, but i think it needed to be said. yes, he interrupted naruto when the blond was trying to confess (or whatever he had planned on saying), but still. it just seems to me that the time he spent teasing and messing with sasuke, he could have told him a long time ago how he felt. i know sasuke could have too, but gah! i've just had it with naruto. the people that act oblivious get on my last nerves, and that's how naruto acts. he knows damn well that sasuke cares about him, but so far, he's done nothing but act like an idiot. grrr...
i know i sound biased, but it's only because i can relate more to sasuke than naruto. i know sasuke hurt naruto with what he said, and he needs to make it up to the blond. but if those two are seriously going to make things work between them, they need to BOTH come together and work things out. i'd hate to see sasuke be the one to act all miserable, while naruto continues on as if nothing has happened. it just breaks my heart that sasuke will probably be made out to be the bad guy in all of this.
i know i sound biased, but it's only because i can relate more to sasuke than naruto. i know sasuke hurt naruto with what he said, and he needs to make it up to the blond. but if those two are seriously going to make things work between them, they need to BOTH come together and work things out. i'd hate to see sasuke be the one to act all miserable, while naruto continues on as if nothing has happened. it just breaks my heart that sasuke will probably be made out to be the bad guy in all of this.
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...Wow. I stumbled accross your story yesterday and have been hanging on every word since, (and desparately looked forward to reading the rest while in school). The way you've characterized Naruto is so blatantly different that it's refreshing. I can honestly say this is the best Naruto fanfic I've ever read. It's incredibly intriguing. Right now, though, what I'm really wondering is what made Sasuke say all those things about Naruto. Has all the anger, jealousy and frustration built up to this? I know this is a SasuNaru fic, but is Naruto gonna turn to Neji or Gaara, (it would probably be Gaara, right?), whilst Sasuke figures out just how big of a mistake he's made? Can't wait for the next update. If it's not troublesome, email me when you do update next. ^______^
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've recently been introduced to Naruto by rosesareblue's The Ultimate Uke Syndrome.
I stumbled across CN while looking for more fics to read on it.
Damn. I just spent 2 whole days reading this. I'm done now, till the last chapter posted.
I hope the offer still stands to send an email when updating. I really want you to include mine in that list.
As my knowledge of Naruto is severly lacking, I'll just say this: Your has encouraged me to dig through the fanfic pile.
Yes, it has.
I hope I get the mail when you update.
I hope that's soon. too.
I stumbled across CN while looking for more fics to read on it.
Damn. I just spent 2 whole days reading this. I'm done now, till the last chapter posted.
I hope the offer still stands to send an email when updating. I really want you to include mine in that list.
As my knowledge of Naruto is severly lacking, I'll just say this: Your has encouraged me to dig through the fanfic pile.
Yes, it has.
I hope I get the mail when you update.
I hope that's soon. too.