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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person Azana
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NANI?! T_T why did Sasuke do that?? it was a nice long chapter n_n sad yet good. Can't wait till the next!
person kuroi-sakurapetals
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my! Sasuke-kun what have you done? He's always been a complete asshole but geez to imply that my beloved pure Naruto-sama is a whore... kill the fricking bastard now!!! This is just like their fight at the valley of the end when he said those hurtful words to Naruto-sama. You've made my heart ache in pain author-san T.T. Please do keep up the great work and update as sson as you can!! i'll be waiting for it!!
person justkat
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gaaah! *Poor* Sasuke...so near and yet so far! Hopefully Naruto will wake up and realise what a horrible few hours he's put him through. Even though I love sap all the way, Naruto really does deserve to suffer a bit for that...he's being quite unreasonable expecting Sasuke to give everything whilst refusing to reveal anything himself. And he seems to have lost track of the fact that sasuke's supposed to be his best friend. Maybe a bit of absence will remind him. But in the meantime, poor old Sasuke still has to manage to get changed and get himself home without being molested on the way! Great story! I'm enjoying it very much. Thanks heaps!!^_^ (PS I'd love an email when you update - kathybarlow@optusnet.com.au)
person Rainbow Kitsune
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*trembling with rage* Sasuke......I am going to kick...your......ASS!!!! You......You.......stupid piece of......of.......*takes deep breaths* I can't believe this. I can't fucking BELIEVE this!!!! You had him. Sasuke, you fucking had him!! Shit, Sasuke!! You have no idea how much I want to put a foot up your ass for ruining this chance. *eyes turn red* That's it!!! *runs off and kills a few people, then runs back covered in blood* Now, I feel better....I guess.

*calms down, a little* I have to say that I love this story and I bow to you.*bows to you* You are awesome. Update soon please. *trembling in anger still wanting to kill Sasuke for ruining his chance*
person TaiyChan
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG NO!!!!! It was going so good too!!!!! You HAVE to update again soon! This story is awesome!!! I absolutly love it!!!!

Great writing, keep it up.

AND UPDATE!!
person Mercedes
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! *weeps* Sasuke, you total IDIOT! *throws things at him* Stupid, stupid, emotionally repressed moron! You HAD it! Naruto's love, lust; everything and you threw it away! ARGH!

*while she's at it, throws things at Gaara, drugged!Neji, and the stupid perv who drugged the drink and hit on Sasuke*

I'm not going to be calm on this one for a while. So I'd better just shove this side and try to give you a real review. Great descriptions, as always and the emotional torture is a hellish bliss. Very well written, nothing that wasn't this good could make me want to strangle someone so damn much. *L* It seems the boys were all getting desperate, especially Gaara.

Sasuke's reactions are REALLY shocking me, I never expected him to be quite THIS dense! Wow, I can't even imagine how he's ever going to get Naruto to forgive him for this one... If it wasn't for the pairing established at the top of th fic, I'd say he just lost his chance for good.

Excellent writing, you constantly leave me craving more. *gnaws on Sasuke's leg*
person Kitsune
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG THIS WAS GREAT!!! but i would like them to get together but this chapter was pure amazment you are such a great author!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person dAni3Lr
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MAN HOW COULD U!!! EVIL!!! DUN STOP THERE!!!! oh my GOD sasuke u BASTARD~~~ why did u get so worked-up for????? listen to naruto FOR ONCE oh goodness me!!!! *roars* T^T T^T T^T i feel so so so sorry for naruto... i'd have bitch-slap sasuke if i were him too, to be insulted in such a way that u have absolute no say in it. damn it~~ T^T akai~~ pls update soon!!! i feel like crying now~~ damn~~~
person katie
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it but u have to have to right more please
person Sheli
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, Sasuke was way too jealous, but that's what you get for bottling stuff up for too long. Now Naruto-kun is out of his reach. How are they gonna patch this up? I think Sasuke should do some serious, serious grovelling, but I'll wait to see how the story unfolds.
WHAT HAPPENED TO NEJI????!!!!!
Where's my Neji-kun?