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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person Ezj-Key
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That were just... brilliant ^^'
This chapters just sooooooo so... yeah so...
Don't exspekt and constructive critisism
here since I can barely spell myslef so
I'll just settle to tell you how good the story is instead.
Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good
Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good
and so on ^_^;
And imagine all the bishounens in drag so hilarious ^___^
Just Gaaras inner 'queen' and Nejis behavior
*is still lating in a puddle on the floor for all the tears
that came from to much laughter*
Geezes even though it's sad at the end of the chapter
I still can't stop laughing XD
I don't care how long I have to wait for a new chapter
you're stories are definetly worth waiting for.

person nyu-sama
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh, burn! and just when i finally thought they were going to hook up. silly dumb boys.
Love this story! so glad you updated!
so much hotness in that last chapter, and 'juliet' was so fucking funny. poor neji.
person %__%
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY! that was 0__0 you are so evil X( how mean of you to let it just there... my my poor naru!
person AsanoMatsuya
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
;_; Aw... Hope this all works out... maybe Sasuke should do something so monumental that it just totally renders Naruto speechless and he'll have to take him back XD that's just my wishful thinking... love following this story!
person nejinee
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*roffle*
Awesome chapter. I love this story so much. I squued when I saw you'd updated. You write very well, at least that's sure. I enjoy how you characterize the different boys. If anything, I still admire how you keep the tension going. Will they? Won't they? OMG they DID! Hehe. Keep up the awesome work.
person Kigen
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg.... that was what i just said after reading the last few paragraphs on chapter 20. I'm really shocked O_O what will happen to those two I hope they didn't mean it X_X
person inuyashalove04
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hiya. Wow, you talk about an exciting chapter. I liked Sasuke and Gaara dressing up, that was good. I was very happy when Sasuke and Naruto finally kissed eachother...man, what a wait. There's some thing that I don't get, why didn't Sasuke let Naruto talk? Why was he angry and jelous? Hm...maybe these questions will be answered in the next chapter....hmm.
Anyway, I love your story. At first I wasn't thrilled with Gaara and Neji being in the story, also trying to get Naruto, but so far...they're needed. So, I'm happy that I waited to see where this was going. But, what will happen now? What will Naruto and Sasuke do? So many questions, and the answers hopefully will be in the next chapter. So, don't let me wait long.
person tenshi213
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
subarashii
as usual.
but I was kinda hoping for something happy.
permanently happy
not Sasuke's assholeish attitude getting in the way.
argh.
LoL
update~
person Jo Kirkpatrick
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
....... OH MY GAWD!

How can you make me love you and hate you all at the same time? That last chapter was so cruel. I was getting all worked up and ready to see them go at it, and then the twist. What a cliffhanger. I think I'm going to cry.

POWERFUL chapter. Seriously. I love it!!!

However, I'm going to kill your professors and burn down your school if you don't update soon. o_o
person ladygizarme
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn dude! this chapter took me from laughing, to giggling from stuff bein cute/funny/hot, to goin "damn! what'd they slip into neji's drink??", to *finally!* for naru/sasu.. to *gahhh why'd you hafta open your mouth sasuke!!??* *cries* ahhhh so much more i could say, for sure, but i'm tired and must zonk! good luck on everything that's goin' on w/school *prays for more hours in the day so you can write* *ahem* yeah i'm selfish.. gomen :p *huggles*