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OMG, THAT'S where you ended it?! Curse you! Curse you, and.. such. But seriously, they were finally giving in, and it was all fine and dandy, and then Naruto tried to be logical/reasonable (for good reason), and it all went to hell! Damn you, Sasuke! And Naruto's last words! Ahhh!!!!!
...okay, I'm better now. ^_^ But seriously.. AWESOME chapter! Gaara getting all dressed up, and Neji getting Sasuke to.. My eyes widened and I seriously started bursting out laughing when that happened. That wasn't what I expected Neji to do, at all. By the way.. what exactly was in his drink? But, yes.. the fight with Gaara and Sasuke was very well written. I can't wait for your next update!

uhhh.. okay. First things first: You're story really ROCKS! ^__^ Your way of writing is really nice too. The blotches of humor are also appreciated [Neji being way too out of it is too funny for me ^^;;] That said, let's move on to the 'critique' of chapter 20.. ehhh... just a disclaimer. I am very biased. Coz I LOVE Sasuke-kun :D

Umm, okay. Sasuke acted a bit irrationally. He got loose of his tongue, and that's not good, especially for the stoic Uchiha.Umm. But then again, I think he HAS a nice point. Naruto doesn't seem too sure of his feelings for Sasuke either [and like your fic, The Tape] he gives off the impression that he's just waiting for somebody [even though he's showing some *vague* preference towards Sasuke] to admit that he loves him, and that he'd go to that person. The Naruto in your fic may not be like that, but that is the... personality he's emitting. [poor Sasuke *sniffles*] So yeah. I don't want to rant here about how unfair it is for Sasuke [I didn't like Naruto when he said, "God, are you in love with me, Sasuke???" It seems that he's taking Sasuke's feeling WAY too lightly] Plus I don't really like NejiNaru, and even more so, GaaNaru [NejiSasu comes with this...] So yeah *again* I'm hoping that you find time writing some more [even though the prospect is that Gaara would be the one to comfort the heartbroken Naruto].

If that happens, I'll be the one to comfort Sasuke LOL But really, Naruto is kinda mean, to Sasuke's feelings. Really. It makes me [as well as others] about his intentions for Sasuke in the beginning, since it really seemed that he's going for my favorite Uchiha.

Ehh. Yeah. This chapter is depressing x____x And it was set right after the hot kissing scene O__O So mean!!! *sniffles for Sasuke some more*

>> Seto's Darkness <<

O.O..
naruto snapped...

*gaspies* Oh my gosh! I almost cried! T_T Update soon! ^^; Oi, this story has had my on the edge of my seat for a while, though, the Neji parts were kind of boring o.o...Erm, not much else at the moment >_< I promise if I reveiw in the future I'll write more but this is going good so far ^_^ I wub it! x.x oi, I wish I could say more but I'm so sick I can't even walk straight >> Yeah...Good Job! ^_^

Foxeh

NOOOOOOOOO PLEASE UPDATE REALLY SOON!!!!!! omg I think i'm going to die T_____T you need to update reallly soon before i slit my wrists with a broken CD * Im kidding just so you know* XO This stoyr is soo good I just can't wait until the new update, I really hope the next chapter will be happy? Well please write more!

~Courtney

oh MY GOD. PLEASE TELL ME MY COMPUTER IS FUCKED UP AND IS GIVING ME A MISSINTURPERTATION. ...PLEASE.....Ithink a small part of me would have died if this was the end of the story....no, a really BIG peice, because this happened to some close friends of mine, except they got back to each other and worked it out. And no matter the fact that the plot ( lovely, by the way), and the promise of SaSuke an' Naru lurvin's in the end is the reason why I shall keep reading, I must say one thing..*clearsthroat*..BE CARFUL WITH YOUR READERS EMOTIONS!YOU HAVE MINE ON A VERY DELICATE STRING RIGHT NOW! ~(T3T)~BREAKS INTO UNCONTROLABLE SOBS* If your story didn't consantly remind me why I love it so much, I wouldn't have read this far....danm you and your addictive plots.Danm you,I say!

damn! What a way to end a good chapter! I was so happy, and now i want to strangle sasuke! But i can see where he's comming from, it DOES seem like Naruto is stringing them all along >< I do hope they patch things up soon as well. :D I can't wait for the next awesome update. lol I check everyday XDDDD

*silent scream* !!!!
OMG WHAT. WHAT. XD How the hell is Sasuke going to fix this now?
Amazing chapter, ne? I enjoyed it very much :D

OH. MY. GOD. You are SO AWESOME - i HATE sasuke for being SO STUPID and i love you for making it so wonderfully dramatic and angst - YAY!!!! VERY well written - and recieved ;) Please write more sooooon!!!!

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Is that the end?! Is this some sort of Evil Cliffy that will never conclude?!?

And just when I thought I knew what was going to happen... I am now throughly confused, but I assume that was your intention