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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person Cherelle Jones
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(claps for about 5 mins.) That ending was awesome. Naruto and Sasuke had a fight. Awsome I couldn't sit still while reading it. (claps again). Bravo Bravo
person shimomizu
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chap 20~woah @_@' so angsty chapter ~!! that's going to make them start the whole narusasu romance from the beginning again *sob* they was sooo close to be together ;_; Sasuke you bloody bastard!?!! How dare you make naru-chan sound so cheap...he does everything just for you T.T.. all you HAVE to say is 'i love you' ...THREE words.... what so hard about it?$%&*(I think the real sasuke will always be im-a-stuck-up-ass-prince-of-ice-that-won't-confess~ ) @@" omg! i actually angsty over a fictional story tehehe X3 Ok i guess next chapter gonna tell us what's exactly sasuke work is right?? i mean the telephone conversation thingy with Mr. Orochimaru ~~cause by tomorrow it's gonna be saturday right?? I seriously hope that naruto and sasuke will be patch up soon or later...and yeah...ermm it's kindda true really... why is naruto acting such a 'whore' o_O'? I mean he could shoo off those guy that bugging him and only concentrate on sasuke....there again sorry for asking that. I guess readers just need to follow the author's plot bunnies hopping....around till the end~ X3 Lastly, ganbatte AkaiTsume-san with your school & work life too~
person Vibribi the crack bunny
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you broke everyones brains XD. Aaaah, poor both of them. Sasuke because I can understand where he's coming from! WTFNARUTO! Tell people you aren't interested because really, I'd be confused by the signals your giving off!

Naruto: I really like you Sasuk- oooh, hey Neiji. Why don't you get in a nice grope. Mmm hmm. I don't mind too much. Right, back to what I was saying Sasuke, oooh, and keep your distance. I don't wanna do anything ras- Gaara! Hey red, what's up? Oh, you wanna grope too and nearly make out! Yeah sure! Okay, where was I? Oh yeah, I really.... Gaara and then Neiji? That's cool! Geeet your lovings in. Awesome. Later. ::mixed signal mixed signal:: Right, so like I was saying, I totally... garsh I'm too shy to say it now X3!

Is what I imagine how Sasuke must have viewed the situation. Chasing a guy who seems to have two devoted followers, having him show interest in you and yet not telling the other two he's not interested is bad. But then I feel bad for Naruto too because, dude SASUKE... that was harsh. Harsher than he deserved especially since he might not have... meant to lead anyone on. AAAAAAAH. I will be a sad sad crack rabbit till this is updated and I can enjoy more healthy dosages of TWO BOYS BEING COMPLETE STUBBORN MORONS ::LOVES ON::.
person lo
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that ending was really intense!!! YOu are really building up the drama, great job. I can't wait to see where you take this. I can't believe you ended it that was. I 'm on the edg of my seat!!! It is soooooo exciting. Keep up the great work!!!!
person me
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like how you expressed the emotions between Sasuke and Naruto. Its almost as if I'm watching this live in my over imaginative mind lol. I love it so far. I cant wait to see what happens between the two.... *stares* must.....have....more *drool*
person Lekai
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Have to admit I don't like the ending to this, doesn't make enough sense with all the melodrama. I wouldn't mind so much so long as you update soon, but it just seemed the angst killed the story *shrug* I'm like that with angst fics though, I think it's easy to overdo it. Naruto seemed weak in this chapter and I didn't really see the consistency. Nonetheless, I love the rest of this fic. I hope you update soon.
person Jolin Kree
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. Oh. My. God......
O_o....
o_O....
I think I'm gonna cry....;_;....gaaaah!! Sasuke! you goddamn fucking little...GAAAAH!!! You screwed everything up you self absorbed bastard! NOOOOOO!!!! *gets slapped*

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hokay, I'm good now. My little NaruSasu fangirl mode taking over..sorry everyone....*cough* anyway, AWESOME addition to the story! The fight was just..wow, I was practically biting my nails off! And the nice little scene before that made me giggle like a mad school girl. XD Keep it up! I can't wait for the next addition to the story! >_<
person ShadowofNothing
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story is awesome, I love it! But.... the end of ch20 was just plain evil.
If it wasn't for the fact that I'm not at home I would've screamed. Loudly. :D
I'm enjoying it very much even when all of them are being stupid.
Let's just hope they'll come to their senses..... maybe.... someday....

Thanks for writing such a great story and keep up the good work!

Ja!
person tsusami
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
my first reaction was NOOOOOOOOOOO ;__; But then, thinking about it. . it wouldn't be so bad if he chose Gaara >.>;; Please update. I don't normally beg, but please.. for the love of God (or whatever deity you worship), next chapter!
person Engelen
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u r teh suck! ToT

I just hope I don't die before the next update!