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Ahh how could you do that to us! I do hope you update quicker this time around instead of making us wait so very long for an update, I neeeed to find out what happens... Whaaa I really want to know really bad... Please hurry and update! I lurve this story soo much!

*shakes head* They're BOTH idiots. I probably find myself siding with Naruto more than Sasuke, but I think they are both justified in their anger. I think Sasuke's right about Naruto 'stringing along' the three of them. In the incident with Gaara in Chapter 20, I can understand why he didn't want to push him away - regardless of whether he returns Gaara's feelings or not, he still thinks of him as a friend and doesn't want to humiliate him by rejecting him in front of everyone. However, there have been several incidents in previous chapters that Naruto could have avoided if he really wanted to - and because he didn't, he's leading Gaara and Neji to believe that if they try hard enough, they might have a chance. Even if he said that he wasn't interested in anything more than friendship, actions always speak louder than words.

However, I think that Naruto would have explained his actions to Sasuke had he had the chance, and assuming that they did get together, I also think that he would make it clear to Neji and Gaara that he wasn't available or interested. But Sasuke didn't give him that chance, and that's why I side with Naruto more than him. I know that he just 'snapped', but I still think he was wrong for not even allowing Naruto the chance to explain himself. I do feel sorry for him, though. Judging by how he acted after he said those things to Naruto, he really didn't mean to say them, or at the very least, he regretted saying them. He really screwed things up. I just wonder what it's going to take and how long it's going to be before Naruto gives him another chance. Don't torture us too much! ^-^;

Oh, and a note to other readers/reviewers: From what I understood, the last line was spoken by Naruto. Sasuke called his name, Naruto glanced back and "spoke his parting words". And it also makes more sense for Naruto to say that, since that's what Sasuke basically accused him of being. (When he said "Or is it simply a matter of who’s willing to pay more?")

NOOOOO!!!! Sasuke is such an idiot I mean I know he was mad and all but to say that to Naruto of all people. How could he? *sighs* I hope he can fix his mistake before he ends up regretting it which I know he will and to be honest he should damn idiot. Update soon cuz I want to know what happens next and what's it going to take to get their relationship back to moral standards or at least to the standards of us yaoi/shounen-ai fans.

You are so cruel. Dx Leaving us with a cliffie like that. *sniffles* Stupid Sasuke. Gah. How are they going to resolve things this time. sheesh.

OMG!!! Yes, put me in there as a minor character so I can go and slap the s*** out of Sasuke PLEASE!! Damn I just so mad at him right now and it's a good thing I don't have my Sasuke plushie yet cuz I might take my anger out of it. Sure I gotten jealous before but that was screwed up s***, how could Sasuke think of Naruto and such a way I mean is that even possible to relate him to such a thing. It just that unthinkable. But yes, please again put me in the story so that if I can kick Sasuke a$$ or at least let me slap the s*** out of him so that he can get his sense back in his head and his own objectives in order. Anyways update soon.

Wow. Just... wow. I didnt see that comming at all D: you practically had me CRYING just then at how sad that was T_T Sasukeeee~ Stop being such a bastard. Please update soon >>; i just have to know what happens.

Oh...dear...

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*reminds self that you said this will eventually be Naru/Sasu*

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*cries*

Ouch...I have no clue how they'll recover from this.

Actually...when I think about it, to me Naruto's "never wanna see you again" bit seemed a bit of an overreaction. After all, Sasuke's words did hold a bit of truth to them. Although they were a bit...harsh. Naruto's whore comment seemed a bit out of place too. More fitting to what Sasuke was saying to him.

Hmmm...*has flashbacks of a certain Naruto chapter in which a certain character "dies"* I loved that chapter (it pissed me off to no end, I thought he really did die) and I wonder if we'll see something like it later from you? It went to show the depth of caring they had for each other too *sniffs at the memory* Sasuke always brings out the best/worst reactions in Naruto doesn't he?

And since I adore your use of songs, try Sway or Fever by Michael Buble. He has a reeeeeallly nice voice Orgasmic, you might say. For some reason, I think his voice would be perfect for...say, Sasuke. Smooth, deep, but not too deep. And don't foget orgasmic ^_^ Not to mention, Sway ("Other dancers may be on the floor, Dear, but my eyes will see only you") and Fever ("When you put your arms around me, I get a fever that's so hard to bear") Rather fitting, me thinks ;) Anywho, atleast listen to them if ye like ^_^

And I also loved your drugged Neji. Poor guy gets hit hard when we feel like using him for comedy relief (not saying someone being drugged is funny, but you know what I mean).

Seeing Itachi might be nice too...if he isnt dead here...I recall you mentioning in the story that Sasuke didn't want to live off his parent's insurance/money they left him....He doesn't have to be evil either! Or, maybe even exploring Sasuke's heritage (Japanese?).

And finally, only you could pull off a chapter like this that will make me fret and worry until you come out with the next one ^_^.

LMAO!

For some odd reason I decided to check today (even though I'd read all the chapters available yesterday) and lo and behold you updated! Which is awesome!

Awesome chapter though Sasuke is in a lot of trouble now.

Hope Neji will be okay.

(Ch. 20)
Wow, what an intensive chapter!! Well worth the wait. You almost had everything settled and happy-ending, but BAM! Just like that, more angst. I'm still a little shell-shocked. XD

I know, your life's in the way XD but try and update as soon as you can. Seriously, this is... in need of a fast update. XDD


Awesome chapter!!!

as we pinoys say, "baaaaaah, patayan na to!"

Love it, and do make Sasuke suffer more.

Mwahahahahaha. XD