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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person Akaitsume
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Only about 2 or 3 chapters left to go...
person nicole
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i am so glad you updated but did you really have to make the ending so sad i know its not the end of the story but it seemed like it and hurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry i wamt to know what will happen plzzzzzzzzz
person Sekkei
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... THAT'S a "Great Uchiha Mistake"! aka G.U.M (O.o)
Anyway I love this kind of Angst!
Update soon please and Happy Halloween ^^!
person Jadejj
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not the way I would of endded a chapter but it's okay
person The Empress
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*pulls all of her hair out while screaming bloody murder* What the FUCK!!!! I am going to kill Sasuke! I am going to Freakin' KILL Sasuke!!!!! *is so frustrated her whole body is turning red* Please, put me in the story and make me slap the holy hell out of Sasuke for letting an opportunity like that get away. *tries to calm down. Is taking long breathes* Damn it Sasuke!! *runs hand through hair and sighs* Man.......I.....I just can't say anything else except that I love this story and you freakin' rock. Now, I have to go calm down somewhere. *stomps off to somewhere*
person macy
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sasuke you idiot!!!!! grrrrr...

wow. intense as ever. you weren't kidding about "crossing the line" as the chapter title huh? ooohwee...grrr..sasuke. *hah* i understand why he said it but, argh, still. stupid move on his part. boo.

great chapter though ^^ totally got me all riled up!
person ItachiSasukeSmex
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh..my...god...Oh...MYGODNONARUTOSASUKEWHATTHEFUCK!?

-Crying- You ass hole, Sasuke. Ass hole.

I can't believe he said those things to Naruto. ;.; That's WRONG. Poor Naruto, Poor fox-boy. -Clings to him-

-Bites Sasuke's head off-

I absolutely LOVE your story, please please continue. ;.;

Good luck with your exams and everything else you're doing and don't forget about your fans. x3

MUCH LOVE!
person Anon
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_______________O!!
person hinshihoushi
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This story has been great and I am so glad you updated. Have enjoyed every chapter, but I have to say this latest one was a doozy. Got chills and my eyes teared up at the end of the chapter. Can hardly wait for the next chapter. Thanks so much for sharing. You do great work!
person -
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Fucking shit. Fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck!!!!!!! FUCK!!!!!!!! FUCK!!!!!!!!! what the helll is going on here? I hate Gaara and Neji. I FUCKING HATE THEM! It's all their fucking fault. This is the first time that I'm so upset with naruto. I have NEVER fucking been upset with Naruto. FUCKING EVER! UGH!!!!!!!! What kind of Naruto is this. And I hate Sasuke, right (I fuckin say that in every one of my comments) but fuck, I really hate Naruto in this fucking chapter. What an ass. What a fuckin ass. Sasuke is totally right! He always allowed others to touch him and shit but with Sasuke he's like a different person. That jackass! Just fuckin tell him you like him, you sexy hot man! UGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hate this chapter yet I fuckin love it yet I reallyyyyyyyyy reallyyyyyy hate it. I love the way you wrote it, but it fucking made me tremble cause I was fuckin upset throughout the chapter. How the FUCK do you do that? And I have NEVER ever cussed like this in my entire fucking life! GAH! UGH! UGH *beats the shit out of a random stranger* You better fucking update the next chapter...SOON! ...

*calms down*........uh, please? (lol)