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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
11:56, I don't know when I started but I know I was supposed to stop after reading the first paragraph, so I'm guessing I started at around 10. There seems to be some sort of.... pull... comming from the fiction, it draws me to it, I..... want it.....
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OK! I have enough self control to go to bed now, so I'm going to do just that. I HATE YOU AND YOUR BLOODY ADDICTING FICTION! But seriously, if you would have used different characters other than Naruto Characters, like OC's, you could have seriously published this shit.
Just something for you to think on before I read more and can again lavish you in praise.
-Aidis
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OK! I have enough self control to go to bed now, so I'm going to do just that. I HATE YOU AND YOUR BLOODY ADDICTING FICTION! But seriously, if you would have used different characters other than Naruto Characters, like OC's, you could have seriously published this shit.
Just something for you to think on before I read more and can again lavish you in praise.
-Aidis
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I'm reviewing now because I'm only four chapters in and might be to pissed to review when I quit for the night. YOUR STORY'S TO DAMN GOOD! I'm ging to try and quit now (my ass) and go to SLEEP but... yeah, so by the time I actually fall asleep in fron of my computer, I'll be to pissed at you to revuew for awhile. Anyways back to reading...
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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that is such a sweet story, I especially like the ending, its beautiful, very touching, the ending made me smile, it's a really well written story, I like the gradually scale of things, how the characters don't suddenly make procclimations of "I Love you" right at the begining, I also love the fact they art overly mushy or sexx driven, there the realistic balance. It's really well written it's one of my favorite stories, you are now one of my favorite writters thanks to this great story, I hope you contiue writting.
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
by far the best fanfiction ive ever read!!!! your amazing-i luv you!!! *teary-eyed* but i dun want this to be the end of it, *content sigh* but it makes life all that more enjoyable-the story that is =3
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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is fantastic. You are a excellent writer and funny as hell.
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
um...update please!!!! ^^ i love it!!
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't help but read this fanfic again. :) I've read this once before...but I had to come back to it. It's such a lovely story. ^^ I almost cried while reading the last chapters. ;-;
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August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
.... ^.^ That was awesome! I'm in love with Naruto all over again!!!! Even though I prefer an uke Naruto instead of a seme one, his personality more than makes up for it!
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this story and I absolutley adore you for writing it! It was very well written. I just loved the way you wrote their thoughts. It was definitely a good read XD
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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it~ unlike other many chaptered fics yours flowed and when I was done I went "That was not 588 pages!!" It was hilarious ^^ I tried to find the Feline American Princess Song but I cant find it on Limewire *cries* I wanna hear it~! If you have it could you please email it to me? Or if that doesnt work my AIM is: W4fFl3 F13nD That's pretty much all I wanted to say ^^ I'm always online so if you could send the song to me I'd appreciate it.