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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...i'm shocked speechless...that was VERY, VERY unexpected, but entertaining...thank you...
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE EVIL! HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT THERE??????
I must say, I do agree with Sasuke a little though. Naruto has been stringing all three of them along, whether intentional or not. The fact that Neji and Gaara are still vying for his attention proves that. Oooohhhhh, I'm dreading the next chapter, but I want to read it!
And I totally empathize with evil exams and professors. My math teacher is more than willing to flunk 1/3 of the class. Yikes!
I eagerly await the next installment of Chasing Naruto. ^_^ BTW, how many more chapters do we have to go?
I must say, I do agree with Sasuke a little though. Naruto has been stringing all three of them along, whether intentional or not. The fact that Neji and Gaara are still vying for his attention proves that. Oooohhhhh, I'm dreading the next chapter, but I want to read it!
And I totally empathize with evil exams and professors. My math teacher is more than willing to flunk 1/3 of the class. Yikes!
I eagerly await the next installment of Chasing Naruto. ^_^ BTW, how many more chapters do we have to go?
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! *weep* that's a terrible ending to a great chapter!!!! ;-; please hurry updating! i can't believe sasuke would insinuate that about naruto.. >
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I did not see that coming, i knew sasuke didn't share well and was reaching a breaking point but i sure didn't see him telling naruto to find another whore...this story is really good but it's sure got it's sad moments, i mean seriously at least 2 hearts will be broken...and it could be 4 if Naruto doesn't get it together...who knew a drag contest could spark such a whirl wind event? though it sounds like a fun time!
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ouch....dram filled, huh?
Gaara with boobs....the mind boggles. Although, right now I'm more worried about just where Neji is in his state *Wibbles*
And then Sasuke...YOU IDIOT! GRRRR! Rawrrr! And that's about as intellectual as I can get right now. He's such a fool - this is the price you pay for being way too angsty for your own good XD
Beautiful - well done, dear.
Gaara with boobs....the mind boggles. Although, right now I'm more worried about just where Neji is in his state *Wibbles*
And then Sasuke...YOU IDIOT! GRRRR! Rawrrr! And that's about as intellectual as I can get right now. He's such a fool - this is the price you pay for being way too angsty for your own good XD
Beautiful - well done, dear.
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it!!
I'm soooooooo happy you updated, I screamed when I saw there was a new e-mail in my in-box, you don't know how happy you made me!
I hope you can get a chance to update again, it was great. Try not to let school bring you down to much, 'cause I know how much it can suck!
I'm soooooooo happy you updated, I screamed when I saw there was a new e-mail in my in-box, you don't know how happy you made me!
I hope you can get a chance to update again, it was great. Try not to let school bring you down to much, 'cause I know how much it can suck!
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
see, i knew that bastard would skrew up some time.....so like are they gonna make up?
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! How could you just end it like that?!@?!?!?!? Please please please update A.S.A.P. Please, Im begging you.
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow... that was definately worth the wait
and the end... oh my god!
i'm lost of words, i really am
(in a good away of course)
n_n
and the end... oh my god!
i'm lost of words, i really am
(in a good away of course)
n_n
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi. Longtime reader, firsttime reviewer.....(whee. I finally got off my @$$ and wrote a review...)
First of all, I'd like to thank you for all the work you've put into this fic. It's shows. Really. I love your writing style. Like most of the top-of-the-line authoresses out there, you paint a great picture of the universe you created...but I think one thing that is distinctly YOU is that you utilize shorter paragraphs, which allows for an easier, smoother pace. Nice. ^_^
Another thing that's awesome about CN is some of the lines....Naruto's "ego" bit...or the "arrow" line....or in the last chapter about tape and hard-ons. Awesome stuff.
Ah. Chapter 20, the long awaited everythinggoestohellandsetsuptheclimax chapter. ^_^ You brought back all the foreshadowing from the past chapters: Sasuke's jealousy, finally putting Naruto in Sasuke's position, and so on. It'll be interesting to read the reviews, I'd imagine...both Naruto and Sasuke are at fault in a way...Sasuke for acting on his jealousy even though he is never willing to speak his feelings...and Naruto for stringing Sasuke along to try to get Sasuke to confess. I was a little disappointed that Neji didn't get a huge role in the big blowup chapter....it's mostly Gaara, Sasuke, and Naruto....I guess that's because the last chapter ended with Neji's drink, so I was expecting him to play a bigger role than comic relief or "moment" interrupter.
Speaking the the "down" chapter....I guess this means it's almost over, ne? It'll be a happy/sad day when that comes. I hope you start another fic soon.
Stay Frosty,
~Chrissy
P.S: (Gotta get my actual reactions to the chapter down now- 0_o *twitch* *spasm*....there we go.)
P.S.S: Say...looking up at the other reviews, I noticed that you go to MSU. Kirei (also a Spartan, and fellow kick-ass writer) hopped to your defense too. ^_^ ....Do you girls know each other?
First of all, I'd like to thank you for all the work you've put into this fic. It's shows. Really. I love your writing style. Like most of the top-of-the-line authoresses out there, you paint a great picture of the universe you created...but I think one thing that is distinctly YOU is that you utilize shorter paragraphs, which allows for an easier, smoother pace. Nice. ^_^
Another thing that's awesome about CN is some of the lines....Naruto's "ego" bit...or the "arrow" line....or in the last chapter about tape and hard-ons. Awesome stuff.
Ah. Chapter 20, the long awaited everythinggoestohellandsetsuptheclimax chapter. ^_^ You brought back all the foreshadowing from the past chapters: Sasuke's jealousy, finally putting Naruto in Sasuke's position, and so on. It'll be interesting to read the reviews, I'd imagine...both Naruto and Sasuke are at fault in a way...Sasuke for acting on his jealousy even though he is never willing to speak his feelings...and Naruto for stringing Sasuke along to try to get Sasuke to confess. I was a little disappointed that Neji didn't get a huge role in the big blowup chapter....it's mostly Gaara, Sasuke, and Naruto....I guess that's because the last chapter ended with Neji's drink, so I was expecting him to play a bigger role than comic relief or "moment" interrupter.
Speaking the the "down" chapter....I guess this means it's almost over, ne? It'll be a happy/sad day when that comes. I hope you start another fic soon.
Stay Frosty,
~Chrissy
P.S: (Gotta get my actual reactions to the chapter down now- 0_o *twitch* *spasm*....there we go.)
P.S.S: Say...looking up at the other reviews, I noticed that you go to MSU. Kirei (also a Spartan, and fellow kick-ass writer) hopped to your defense too. ^_^ ....Do you girls know each other?