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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person lime_one (again)
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh sorry. One more point. May you never cave and keep your "tease the readers" style. It's awesome and, really, it mirrors how the actual series works too. Things are always better if you're denied them forever right? ^_^

person Anon
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As much as I love each and every chapter you do and I was thrilled when you updated, I was confused by the last sentence.... was that Naruto or Sasuke that said, "Find yourself another whore"?
person coriander
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh... Sasuke really went too far this time. Is that even fixable? I can't believe he'd be such a gigantic asshole. oh well. I guess we'll see where this is going soon enough. Ja!
person ayonoi
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh goth, that was a really hard chapter to read. They really know how to hurt each other, don't they. I feel bad for both of them, when you are in love and you are jealous is hard to stop. Sasuke will regret it.

Poor Naruto, I don't think he wants to see anyone after this. He was really trying to go slow and make things work with Sasuke because he knew he liked him so much he wanted to make sure Sasuke felt the same way about him. It is going to take a lot of work for Sasuke to get Naruto to trust him again. I think that is what hurts Naruto the most, that Sasuke can think him so shallow and his trust has just shattered. SIGH, those boys. You did a good job portraying all the feelings of the people involved.

Can't wait to see more even if it's this hard to read *sniffles*
person Vampire Ifurita
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! *Dies* Sasuke is an idiot! I quote the old adage "Open mouth insert foot" here. How stupid was that? Gahhh... *wants to hurt Sasuke, stalks off finds him and hits him repeditively, Naruto, still being extremely mad does nothing but watches* Idiot! I mean, I can almost understand him getting mad... but not that much. He went to far and he knows that now *glares at now unconcious Sasuke*... Gaara in drag? *laughs and tries to imagine it before getting squished by sand* And what the heck was in Neji's drink? He went freaking crazy OOC in there... wow-ness.

Anyway, small rant aside, I ADORE this fic! Though right now I'm not liking what happened in there in that last chapter, oh the Angst! But I deal. With any luck it'll all turn out alright *pleading eyes* Oh please let it turn out alright. This is just so beautifully written and I can't stop reading it once I've started. The proverbial "getting sucked into what you are reading, being transported into the world that the author has created" and all that. But man, gorgeous. Love it! Can't wait for more! And I will impatiently wait for more and then greatly rejoice when more comes. Beautiful job! Love it!
person Kelly
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG... WHat happened in the end.. OMG.... DUN TELL ME THAT IT ISNT NARUSASU ANYMORE... just goshing... Hope they get better again!
Cool fanfic though... I love the kissing part... SO EROTIC... Anyway... Update soon please!!! Flunk all ur exams and concentrate on this fic... I LOVE IT.... Hahahahaha!
person GAUZE
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!??
person Reyn
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAH! Sasuke doesn't understand Naruto! Naruto doesn't understand Sasuke! (jest noticed the 'uke' in 'Sasuke') Why must guys be so thick headed?!?!

One thing tho, who said that last line? I'm pretty sure it was Naruto, but the words themselves seemed to be more fitting coming out of Sasuke's mouth...(is extremely confuzzled about this)
person Red Hades
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU HATE ME DON'T YOU ?!?!!?

I can't believe it. I'm so distressed right now. They HAVE to make up right? PLEASE?


I love this story. I think it is quite possibly the best fanfiction I've ever read. So please update soon...please?

:::runs off to lose sanity::::
person adri
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg omg... *cries* noooooooooooooooooooo.... don't leave me like that.. *sobs*