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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First of all, i must say that i love this story. You're writing is so good, and i love your humor. But there is one thing that annoys the hell out of me (quite much, to be honest), and I'm sure I'm not alone. The fact that this is taking place in USA. *grits teeth* Other than THAT... *shudders* ....good job.
I loved the fact that you let them ride horses, this is the first time i've encountered this in a Naruto fanfic. Loved those chapters, even though most of the jokes makes no sense to most people (well it's their loss, innit?). God, don't i feel like Shikamaru... XD I'm the lazy one at my stable, lol. ^^;
Keep up the great work!
I loved the fact that you let them ride horses, this is the first time i've encountered this in a Naruto fanfic. Loved those chapters, even though most of the jokes makes no sense to most people (well it's their loss, innit?). God, don't i feel like Shikamaru... XD I'm the lazy one at my stable, lol. ^^;
Keep up the great work!
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I don't think I saw a disclaimer on this story, unless I totally missed it trying to hurry up and get to the story.^_^;; Just in case you didn't, Please put one up somewhere so they won't delete this awesome story. This story is just to good, no, too brilliant to delete. I don't want it to be deleted.=( Please Hurry.
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hee ^^ I read all of this in one long go and at the cliffhanger, I think my inner child died of frustration at not being able to read the next bit right away. You have an extremely interesting style for an AU, one that takes the subtle elements of the Naruto-verse and weaves them into your own story to make something unique, but true to the essence of canon (because, as ever Naruto fangirl knows, Sasuke/Naruto is soooo canon XD) Your characterisation of both the two main boys, plus Neji and Gaara is very precise, something I'm enjoying a lot, but in the odd habit I have of picking up on minor characters in the story, I'm very much intrigued by your TenTen. A lot of people make her overly feminine...but she's not. She has a rather manly spirit wrapped in a woman's body though manly's probably not the best word for it. Hmmm...anyway, I liked your portrayal of her. A lot. It's possibly the best TenTen I've seen for a long time ^^
So lovely story you have here. Do you mind putting me on your e-mail alert system?
Lell
So lovely story you have here. Do you mind putting me on your e-mail alert system?
Lell
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Sasuke seems to take the lead in many NaruSasu fics so its a nice change to see Naruto in charge. Also, I really enjoy how Naruto maintains his cocky/boyish personality yet reveals a highly intelligent/thoughtful person underneath the jock mask. The way he manages the sticky situations with all the boys chasing him is something. I just love this fic. And chapter 19 is my favorite so far...just imagining Naruto in 'drag' with gyrating hips pulsing to "Take Me Out" was hot as hell.
There is a very realistic quality to the relationship btwn Naruto and Sasuke both being so vunerable beneath their masks. I mean, the story isn't littered with gay stereotypes and Naruto acknowledges that gender isn't so much the issue with him, which I feel as well. So even though this is a work of fanfic, I thoroughly enjoy being able to relate to the characters.
Also, as a 23 yr old Black woman, it is nice to read works by other Black women with an interest in writing, anime and yaoi because it is not often that I come across someone with those same likes.
I look forward to the next chapter. Poor Neji!! But I can't wait to see what Sasuke does when Naruto comes off the stage!
Chan
There is a very realistic quality to the relationship btwn Naruto and Sasuke both being so vunerable beneath their masks. I mean, the story isn't littered with gay stereotypes and Naruto acknowledges that gender isn't so much the issue with him, which I feel as well. So even though this is a work of fanfic, I thoroughly enjoy being able to relate to the characters.
Also, as a 23 yr old Black woman, it is nice to read works by other Black women with an interest in writing, anime and yaoi because it is not often that I come across someone with those same likes.
I look forward to the next chapter. Poor Neji!! But I can't wait to see what Sasuke does when Naruto comes off the stage!
Chan
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aiyaaa, the one good thing about me not having time to read your updates right away is that when i do i have alot waiting for me, which i love... so, just read like.. 3 chapters i think, and it was awesome of course.. i can't even list everything i loved about them lol, you're awesome... i love every single thing that happened lol.. naruto staying at sasuke's after the movie, hearing sasuke say that and kissing him, but especially.. ESPECIALLY naruto in drag and dancing.. omtezukaryomaandfuji, that was fuckin hot,(lol i actually said out loud "omg dana i love you ^_^) i totally feel for sasuke heheh... but now i'm like gaahhhhh cuz i wish there was more to read already haha, i hope you have time again soon... i wanna know what happens next! and what's gonna happen to neji? what's the damn project naruto's workin on?? *shakes fist* damn you college exams :p
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More. Now. Oh dear LORD. This is what keeps me sane. I love you. <333
And Naruto's finally come to his senses. -sigh- It's about time. xD I'll be checking for more!
And Naruto's finally come to his senses. -sigh- It's about time. xD I'll be checking for more!
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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*drool* lol. omg. i love the last chapter. please tell me you're writing more. omg. i can't wait!! i jsut love your writing style. and story. it's so wonderful.
~Okami
~Okami
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story. I especially loved the chapter with Naruto saying you're
a sucker for marvelous me. After reading it, I went and found the F.A.P.
(Feline American Princess) song. Listening to the song and remembering the story had
me laughing so hard I cried. It was great. I also loved the last chapter. Imagine
Naruto dancing around stage, I know it boosted his ego. Though you have to love Naruto's
personality. It's great. Looking forward to your next update.
a sucker for marvelous me. After reading it, I went and found the F.A.P.
(Feline American Princess) song. Listening to the song and remembering the story had
me laughing so hard I cried. It was great. I also loved the last chapter. Imagine
Naruto dancing around stage, I know it boosted his ego. Though you have to love Naruto's
personality. It's great. Looking forward to your next update.
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
m'dear... I must say that I am awestruck with your writing.
Never have I laughed, laughed so hard I cried, or cried so hard I laughed (yes, I have cried during some parts, only to laugh when I realize that these were parts that need not have tears), when reading a fanfiction.
I commend you on your rapid updates, and would simply kill to have other authors update as quickly as you do.
Your most current chapter had me sinking my teeth into my hand to keep myself from screaming, either from the mental picture of Naruto strutting around in that outfit, or from well... Naruto strutting around in that outfit. That had to be, and most undoubtedly was, the best time I've had in the longest of times.
First off, I'd like to thank you for picking up the mood of a most horribly depressed person.
Secondly, I'd like to thank you for even writing such a freaking amazing fanfiction. (To say the truth, I would have skipped the story if I'd just read the summary, I've never been a fan of A.U. fics... but your's has taken the cake... the entire freaking bakery even!)
Thirdly, Keep up the awesome work. And good luck in your exams (If I'm too late for this... I hope you did well. If not... my wish remains standing).
~ Much fan-worship; Jen
Never have I laughed, laughed so hard I cried, or cried so hard I laughed (yes, I have cried during some parts, only to laugh when I realize that these were parts that need not have tears), when reading a fanfiction.
I commend you on your rapid updates, and would simply kill to have other authors update as quickly as you do.
Your most current chapter had me sinking my teeth into my hand to keep myself from screaming, either from the mental picture of Naruto strutting around in that outfit, or from well... Naruto strutting around in that outfit. That had to be, and most undoubtedly was, the best time I've had in the longest of times.
First off, I'd like to thank you for picking up the mood of a most horribly depressed person.
Secondly, I'd like to thank you for even writing such a freaking amazing fanfiction. (To say the truth, I would have skipped the story if I'd just read the summary, I've never been a fan of A.U. fics... but your's has taken the cake... the entire freaking bakery even!)
Thirdly, Keep up the awesome work. And good luck in your exams (If I'm too late for this... I hope you did well. If not... my wish remains standing).
~ Much fan-worship; Jen
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eee! Yay, you updated! I'm glad I decided to check today.
Hee, I thought this last chapter was hot. It so screams 'prelude to sex'. Not to mention that your Sasuke's so adorable. ^_^;; I love your writing style.
Hee, I thought this last chapter was hot. It so screams 'prelude to sex'. Not to mention that your Sasuke's so adorable. ^_^;; I love your writing style.