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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person Liliess
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHH!! Neji! I don't even know or want to know whats going to happen next to him. >< AND DAMN! Did anybody notice Sasuke's thingie? O.O
person Dasu200
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey what's taking you so long , I really like your story Chasing Naruto, beleave it or not , it the only good thing I have to read , or watch because fuller naruto's shows they are playing , please updata soon
person Fan1
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I still say out of all off the stories I have read on aff [dot] net this IS the best one...all of the others...sorry...
have just been one of the best...but Chasing Naruto is officially my favorite story...I love Naruto's personality...
I could definitely fall for someone like that...I would get so excited when it was written that Sasuke and
Naruto were together...but I always knew it was a dream and it would make me sad when it finally said it was...
I can't wait till it becomes true...but the story is doing great even though they aren't "together"...
I'm dreading the moment Naruto finds out about the bet...please don't let him be mad at Sasuke...I would cry
if they didn't end up together...one of the best chapters is chapter 19...I loved the show with Naruto...
I can just imagine it...uh...so hot...*drools*...one final aspect of the writing...I love the whole "bloody
nose" thing...no one has used that in any of their writings before that I've read...I love that you included it...
well...greatly looking forward to the next chapter...keep up the excellent work...

Fan1

p.s. I love the story behind Neji and Gaara...maybe you could do two spin offs where each of them gets together with Naruto...I would like that...well talk to ya later...
person Brittany
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
......im speachless...YOURE WRITING IS SOOOOO KICK BOOTY!!!you obviously show great creativity in your work and its a trait i COMPLETLY admire.PLEASE KEEP WRITING FOR THE SAKE OF YOUR FANS(which would be me and anonymous people) im working on a story myself and i hope i can make it as humorous and creative as your story.by the way, i luuuuuuv the NaruXSasu pairing.reading your chapters made me laugh and it made me cry at the sad parts.its soooooo funny when Naruto dresses in drag!LMAO!!i really look forward to the next chapter and dont give up!! WE PRAISE YOUR WONDERFUL WORK!!.......(turns out,im not as speachless as i claim)
person MoonlightShadow
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
......OMG! I love this story!!!! *beams* No!! you must hurrie and update pplleeaassee?? befor I die!! lol!! Kepp up the awsome work!
person Paradox Ink
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was great. I was cracking up throughout! I could totally picture Naruto being first reluctant, but then completely comfortable with being put in drag and Take Me Out is definetly his song. I can imagine him dancing to it. I thought the idea of Sasuke being dragged to a drag show was beyond funny. I can just imagine him sitting there, ramrod straight, getting hit on and feelingn completly uncomfortable (despite the fact that he's gay or bi or whatever himself). And that Neiji! I feel sorry for him, but did he have to be a crasher? Be kind to him and put him with someone who will be good to him, he deserves it; the poor dear. Are you going to continue to torture Sasuke? As amusing at it is, I think he deserves some releif. Naruto is being stupid about Sasuke. If he wants a confession he could just say so. I mean, he should know that's the sort of thing Sasuke would have trouble saying. Of course, you being the author, you know all this, but anyway.
I thought the chapter was very good. I don't really have any constructive critism at all for this chapter, since I know you asked for it. But really, this chapter was just so good, that I don't think it needs improvment. You saw my suggestions for the last post (which kinda covered the whole story)?
More please?
Your updates make me shout for joy.
-love and transmutation circles!
-PI
person Fan1
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have only read the first chapter...and I have to say...I love the story so far...it's great...can't wait to continue reading...thankfully there are other chapters to keep my interest for a while...but considering how much I like it...I might lose sleep over it...*laughs to self*...keep up the good work...

Fan1
person MultifacetedTune
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy SHIT. O_O Well, daaaaaamn, girl! That was certainly worth the wait, lol. ^___~ I feel sorry for Sasuke....... Neji, too, but mostly Sasuke. I hope you update soon -- I can't wait to find out what happens, both to Sasu-kun and Neji. And as for Naruto........... *drools* Yummalicious!!! ^___~ Ja ne!
person gasa
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GASP
nejiii?
person kai
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh no, neji!! someone save neji!!

update soon!!