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holy mother of god. you DIDN'T just end it there! O.o

i just have to tell you that your writing is BRILLIANT. i've read the past few chapters with a permanantly amused expression, and have laughed out loud *alot* (which is certainly hard to get me to do). this is one of the very very few stories that i am absolutely rivoted to.

you make the characters all so believable. and not very OOC, even though that would be typical for an AU fic. you can poke the sexual tension with a stick, and it's done so sexily.

at the end, i think:
poor naruto: he's just now getting the clue that he has three infatuated guys after him
poor sasuke: he's been a good sport for most of what naruto puts him through
poor neji: ...poor about-to-be-molested neji. he's a bit of a prick in this fic but by damn, i'm afraid for his virtue!

the 3 boys all have good reason to want to be with naruto, so i feel for them. it's just that he and sasuke have so much chemistry. and they are so sweet trying to hold back their emotions, as they don't realize it's all ok just to get together. (don't ignore the dreams, guys.)

**on another note**
if you need anything to help you along with your fic, just send along a mail.
(such as how things look from a reader's perspective, more comments, etc.)

XD Awesome! I'm so happy you finally updated! ;__; Now, if only Naruto can say, "No, Neji, I'm on a date with Sasuke." Maybe one of the gay guys will drug him and take him home. XD *mean* Then Sasuke and Naruto can have the rest of the night to... discuss things. ;D

Update soon!

Gar! I hate you! It makes me wish I had time to write more! I want so much to work on my story but I don't and I want to read more of this because it makes me want to write more, and the more I want to write the more willing I am to skip sleep to do it!!! And the cliffy! Why can't the just hop into bed already... wait they did that.... I mean hop into bed NAKED!! >.< I hate you... no, no... I'm sure I love your writting so I can't hate you. ANYWAY!! Write more. Then I'll write more... and we'll ALL be happy, ne?
~Hawk

OMFG!!! That's the hottest, most erotic scene!
I've read it twice and I still can't find appropriate words to express my utter amazement!!!
All coherent thought in my mind are:
Primo: HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!!!! *drools madly*
Secundo: MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!!!

Amazing as usual. I thought that your Breaking Sasuke story was one of the best SasuNaru stories I had ever read, but you have really outdone yourself with this story. So damn sexy and there hasn't even been any real action yet! I must say that I do hope that Neji and Gaara have happy endings as well. And what a cliffie!!! Gah! :)

Wow. You really took the reader for a ride with this chapter, but it was great. You made the whole drag thing work, and made it some what sexy. I am truley impressed. Keep up the great work.

OMFG... YOU DONT EVEN KNOW HO MUCH I LAUGHED IN THIS CHAPTER!!! *wiggles* ahh i love this fic so much.. please update!!!!!! again!!! i love you!!!! *dies* ahh naurto is so fucking hot... *squeals* i hope sasuke creams his pants :D! ehh somebody wants Neji O_O... *VIOLENT TWITCH* you made gaara so freakin hot (hes my fave character O.<) op,fg.. naruto is so fuckin hot.. i love this story!!

WRITE MORE!! ^________________^

i'm glad u updated

I'm not really in the mood to be coherent so I'm just going to say two things:
1) NOOOOOOOOO NEJI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please don't let anything happen to Neji, Go Naruto save the day!!!!
2) I would LOVE to see a picture of Naruto dressed in drag:D

Great new chapter, hope to see a new update soon especially with that cliffhanger

Hmmm...interesting ending. I assume that these guys are going to take advantage of Neji later...not cool...I can see Naruto beating the pulp out of them before they get to try anything...and they end up sharing a "special moment"...which will piss Sasuke (and maybe in turn piss Naruto off because Sasuke is being jealous in that kind of situation, but lets all hope he (sasu) has more character than that) off. Or things take a funny turn and Sasuke ends up being the one who saves him. Which would be cool. (and was I just squinting too hard, or were Sasuke and Neji actually sharing a moment of something like friendship before Naruto comes out in all his glory? Because if they were, that would be great.)

Or both of them are too late, which would be really really bad for Neji. And then we have Gaara floating around somewhere (wonder if he saw Naruto's little show)...

Ohhh...very steamy chapter, IMO. Absolutely loving the interactions between Naruto and Sasuke during the dance.