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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person dagget
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God That's Awsome! This is the most entertaining fic ever. Must have more! And now I'm dying to know what happens to Neji. Don't leave us hangin'.
person twisted-sheets
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH YES YOU WILL SASUKE! YOU WILL JUMP ONSTAGE AND FUCK NARUTO SENSELESS!

I love your fic. So much FS but still in character. Good! Good!

Is that....Roofies I see being put in Neji's drink or something? ^_^;;

Well, good luck with school! Lucky you! I have WORK tomorrow. :D
person ayonoi
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh god! Please... I hope nothing evil happens to Neji, that would suck massively. Probably Naruto would get involved. SIGH. Good cliffhanger though, really good.

I laughed really loud when I read the first line of the song, I freaking love Franz Ferdinand so I was like AHHHHHH!! COOL!! I can just imagine Naruto dancing suggestively to Sasuke during that song. It was really read the scenes in this chapter. I wish the kids luck.

Neji!! Take care of yourself!
person Myuki-chan
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have killed me. Completely and utterly DEAD. D:
I can see why you had fun writing this XD
Too bad Neji ruined their date. Although, I don't think he deserves whatever was tipped into his drink...XD;
Aww, Naruto know he likes Sasuke now! That's a good thing :D
person MeLaiya
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, you ase so evil. You cannot just leave us hangin like that. PLEASE HURRY AND UDPATE AND I MEAN LIKE IN THE NEXT FEW HOURS.
person The Empress
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*drools* omfg! Naruto is so sexy. *stares at Naruto still drooling* Sasuke you lucky man.
Uh oh. Neji is about to get drugged. Oh my god. This is going to get real interesting. *evil smirk*
person oOKeairaOo
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, that was great. And eerie, since I actually just had the opportunity to go to my first drag show a few weeks ago. It was great, and also funny because a few of the performers were REALLY bad, but there were some good ones, too. Overall, I loved it. I was supposed to go again last Monday night because a friend of mine was participating in the show for the first time, but I never made it inside. ^^; Ended up passed out in my other friend's car out in the parking lot of the club. *sighs* I really regret missing it. For future reference, don't mix vodka and two shots of black gold. Your body won't like it. x.x; I missed four classes the next day.

ANYWAY... excellent chapter. Naruto getting dragged up on stage to dress in drag was hilarious, but I'm glad you didn't put him in anything that was really feminine. ^^; The way you've described his body in this story, I just don't think it would work. But the outfit you did have him in was hot, and I loved the descriptions. It was great what he was doing to Sasuke, and I had high hopes for something happening next chapter, but with someone slipping something in Neji's drink, I have a feeling that will be ruined. x.x; Ah well, maybe next time.
person Anon
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
evil cliffhanger....
person KittyKatty
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*_* LOVE THIS FIC
person naruke
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know the feeling.. OF HAVING EXAMS! I JUST F******G HATE THEM! (now when that's out of system, we shall contiune) I beg you on my knees that you contiune this story when you can!