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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was an incredibly cruel cliffhanger...
Haha and poor Sasuke! He'll have to use every ounce of self control he has.
I hope Neji is going to be alright..
Haha and poor Sasuke! He'll have to use every ounce of self control he has.
I hope Neji is going to be alright..
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy moly, this chapter kicked butt. The cross-dressing really cracked me up, it was priceless! I can't wait to see what happens to Sasuke, hahaha. I hope Neji leaves this experience unscathed. o_o
Good luck with the exams!
Good luck with the exams!
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No way! When I first started reading this fic, I though I was reading a completed story! Now I finally get to the "end" and find out it's not finished! NOOOOOOO!!! *Pout* I feel sad now. This story kicks large proportions of ass, though! Seriously, I'm a very picky reader, and absolutly HATE having to slog through shitty fic when I'm first getting into a fandom, before I can find some good authors. But I was lucky with Naruto! I mean, holy shit, the second fic I ever read of the fandom is GREAT! I love AU fics, particularly high school and college fics, and this one is SO well done. I'm a freshman (and a half- since I took a summer semester before my first formal year) and I can totally relate to a) evil washing machine, b) late profs (who are only late when you rushed to be on time but reem you out when YOU'RE late), c) loud people in dorms when your trying to study, d) roomates knowing far to much about the inner working of your mind, and e) shitty cafiteria food, f) bad weather when you have to walk everywhere. This list could do on, but you get the point. I always like fics I can identify with. I don't think your characters ever get too occ either, or if they do, you do it gradually, and with careful explanation. That just rocks. I coined a phrase for a rpg signiture once, "Good writing will send you to another world. Bad writing will send you to the toilet." This is definetly the former. Harah for good writing! Good writing give my a warm and fuzzy feel inside ^_^.
Anyway, sorry to rant, but I think it's reallly good, and you DID say you didnt' want one liners. So there you are. I'd just add that the stuff with the horses got a little endless, but the rest of the fic was so good I didn't mind. I'm really getting ready for a conclusion though. This endless backand forth, nothing-ever-happens thing is getting frustrating. And I admit, I want my lemon scene already!
Great job! MORE MORE MORE!!!
-Love and transmutation circles!
-PI
Anyway, sorry to rant, but I think it's reallly good, and you DID say you didnt' want one liners. So there you are. I'd just add that the stuff with the horses got a little endless, but the rest of the fic was so good I didn't mind. I'm really getting ready for a conclusion though. This endless backand forth, nothing-ever-happens thing is getting frustrating. And I admit, I want my lemon scene already!
Great job! MORE MORE MORE!!!
-Love and transmutation circles!
-PI
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nothing's ever simple...
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mawhahahaha! Yes yes! Slip Neji something! Make him have crazy, wild, orgy sex! xDD
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just don't have anything to say...
I mean, how the Hell do you expect me to say something that is, at least, the slightest bit coherent after THAT!!
This chapter was nothing like what I'd expected!!
Jeez, you totally rock my world!^^
Hope to read the 20th chapter soon...But I wont curse ya if your mind is busy with somethin else..like many other people, I know what its like to be stuck between school, work and an almost non-existent life!=^_^=
Keep on going, I'm with you all the way!!!!!
Oh yeah...and please, whatever was in Neji's glass, make him sleep so Sasuke and Naruto have some gooooood time together, but don't kill him....plz..lol=)
See ya
Yurikai Kurosaki
I mean, how the Hell do you expect me to say something that is, at least, the slightest bit coherent after THAT!!
This chapter was nothing like what I'd expected!!
Jeez, you totally rock my world!^^
Hope to read the 20th chapter soon...But I wont curse ya if your mind is busy with somethin else..like many other people, I know what its like to be stuck between school, work and an almost non-existent life!=^_^=
Keep on going, I'm with you all the way!!!!!
Oh yeah...and please, whatever was in Neji's glass, make him sleep so Sasuke and Naruto have some gooooood time together, but don't kill him....plz..lol=)
See ya
Yurikai Kurosaki
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay, completely surprising, all totally unexpected, very unique, everything just had me grinning from ear to ear - i absolutely *loved* it!!
it was so totally worth the wait. n_n
it was so totally worth the wait. n_n
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhh!!!!!!!!! Another great chapter! I hope nothing bad happens to Neji. I wish the drag show was real and I could see Naruto grinding. Of course, I'd probably have the same problem as Sasuke. ;)
Keep up the good work! Good luck with finals!
^_^
Keep up the good work! Good luck with finals!
^_^
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEVIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIILLLLLL.. *pout* that wasn't nice lol. That was one of my favorite chapters I think. That was really good. Kudos
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD! THAT WAS AMAZING, i've never laughed so much at one time in all my freakin life. that was soooooo funny, man i love your story. i could just picture sasuke's face when he found out that they were at a drag show, hehe and neji too! Naruto in leather, You are my goddess! well, i must say though, it's nice to see things heating up, i can't wait entill naruto and sasuke have, and i quote, "wilde monkey sex" please make it soon, i can't take anymore teasing! and you'd better update soon cause i wanna see what's gona happen to our poor neji, he's not gona get gang banged is he? UPADTE SOON