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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person Just_me
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD I never laughed so hard in my life... Naruto in drag!!! Oh, my vision keeps blurring.... and oh, you're so evil for making this a cliffie.
So, is Neji gonna wake up spread eagle underneath a stranger, or is he going to faint and picked up by an ambulance? And I definatly wanna know if Naruto is going to survive Sasuke's hormones. X3 Please, please, please update soon.
ja ne ^^V
person kelly
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heya.. dun you ever stop at this rate... IM LIKE WAITING EVERYDAY... CHECKING THE UPDATES.. AND SAW NONE... DUN STOP><
person Amber
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ne ne, Dana it took me forever to find your fics but they really are really good. It's amber from JCMU, I tried to write you before but you didn't respond. Anyway I read through this fic, it is awsome!! It's confusing, and frustrating, and really really hot =^^= I'm not a huge NaruSasu fan but I make an exception for really well done fics ^_- But Sasuke afraid of horses? ^o^ I could not stop giggling! Wow, awsome. Anyway, you still thinking about doing that fantasy fic you were talking about thats fairy tale like? I think you could really have fun with that. Hope school isn't killing you too badly. Write me if you ever get some time.
person pasc55
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good very good!!!!!!!!! you know how to keep suspens !!!!! ; )
person Anon
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
write!!!!!!!!!!!iloveyou but write!!!!!!!
person Queenphoenix
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've read hundreds of fanfictions and this is the only one that I've read 3 times. Keep up the good work!
person Azana
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm very interesting. the storyline is really good so far...but must you keep Naruto so mysterious??? I'm looking foward to to the next chapter.
person Blackdragondiva
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is coming on great! I really can't wait for Naruto to take Sasuke out on a date Friday night, its going to be so much fun. LOL, I adore Sasuke's love for unsalted pretzels! that's comical! personally, I always saw him as a pocky kinda guy, but i think that unsalted pretzels could so totally be his thing. you've kept this story so interesting too! its not getting boring or repetative or unoriginal, you're keeping it upbeat and questioning. its going to be fun finding out about Sasuke's past in this AU, and I keep wondering if Naruto's going to tell him about the kiss! will Sasuke be forced to ask for a kiss -shudder- :P or will something tip the tables and Neji or Gaara jump in on the Naruto action?!
Also, the way you convayed Hinata was wonderful and so totally like her. Kiba being a nervous bundle of energy was priceless, especially the tie part :P.
this fic is turning out wonderful and I can't wait for you to come back and update! Thanks for the entertainment! its irreplacable!
+J+
person Midnight_Myst
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just love it when Sasuke gets all snuggly. For chapter 18, the version you decided to go with was way better than the first one you posted at the end. It was a bit more realistic, I think.

I also loved the part about Sasuke's weakness being pretzels. Too cute!

Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the great work!
person jigglyjellosocks
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you sonofawitch!!!!update pls?wait...no i bet ur busy so wen u get the chap done itll be good. its okie take ur time dear. but u do write really great yknow...*my idol* ^_____________^