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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person TK
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that is prayhaps one of the best au's i have ever read and i have read a good 75% or more of all narusasu and sasunaru on adultfanfiction.net. you nailed naruto beautifully the whole way through, funny yet not quite so stupid. your plot was fantastic, your grammer and spelling well checked, character developement well defined, and i just love it when the boys are older and are drop dead sex gods.^^ i love narusasu and thus love you for your hard and detailed work. you are an inpiration. thank you.
person The Empress
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, how I friggin' loved reading this story, I'm so happy. >:D You are so awesome, the story is awesome. Me loved it alot. :) This story had me all emotional and stuff dang it. :) I love stories like that. :) You are awesome.
person Herme23
schedule June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohmigods!! I've been waiting sooo long to read the rest of this story, and I have to say, I wasn't disappointed! This is so wonderful, I completely enjoyed this story. Thank you so much for sharing it! It honestly puts me to shame. Thanks again, I look forward to reading more from you, yours Herme
person Nobody knows
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh gawds i've been waiting practically forever to finish this story...i was reading it before aff.net tempoparily abandoned me and i nearly burst into tears when i couldn't continue it...i loved it....sometimes i just wonder where on earth you get this awesome material, i mean, A DRAG SHOW?!?! i loved the drag show the best...*sighz* and everyone got all dolled up too!! yay!!! ok ok i ramble but i loved this alot...alot alot alot...kudos to you, you're an awesome wirter...*winkz*
person Caro
schedule March 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Once again...I'll review here even though I already did at ff.net. A brilliant end to an equally brilliant story. Everything was...just...wow...I had re-read some chapters since it's been awhile. But yes, this story is golden! ^.^
person DevilLived
schedule March 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHH!!!! I TOTALLY LOVED IT!!! IT was awesome, great job! You write the characters really well and everything else!

I loved how you write Naruto and Sasuke's thoughts in the italics, very very funny.

Anyways, this story has been great, fun and every other positive adjective that I can't come up with at the moment!

Be proud, be very proud! MWUAHAAHAH!
person Musey
schedule March 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not maybe a helpful review, but I just want to express my love for you as an author!
Your stories are truly one of the best I've seen out there. You manage to keep them perfectly in character, which is surprisingly rarely seen! I've lost count on how often I squealed over the story, and Sasuke's rant by the tree was just.. Heartbreaking *_*;;

Anyway, can't wait to see more from you ^__^ xxx
person Embyr
schedule February 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mwahahahah, I review again!! ~has read the other Naruto fics~ :3 but wherefore is Chapter 24? ~sobs~
...no, I'm kidding ;p I read it in FF.net u_u though....lemon.....>_> You know that's what we're all here for anyway ~cackle~
Awesome writing by the by, I enjoy this story immensely ^__^v
person R
schedule February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am impressed and eaten. Your fic ATE my brain. I'd have to say that my favorite 'what the wtf' moment was the mental images I was given when you so eloquently described a queen'd Sasuke and Gaara having a catty fight. Thank. You. From the bottom of my rotting heart. I will cherish it forever. Maybe even pass it on to my grandkids. Anyway, I'm eagerly awaiting the end (because, well, you know ;) and I wish you the best of luck in TONFA's awards contest. Don't die!
schedule February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry everyone. I have the final chapter written, but no one can update at aff until March 1st-ish. I'll be able to post it then.

In the meantime, you can find the update (both the smut and the non-smut versions) at my webgroup. Make sure to leave a review (preferrably here). Thanks for all the support!

Mata ne-

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