rate_review Reviews

I can't wait what will happen "tomorrow"
I beg ya update soon :)

Your story is just great :)
I love when Sasuke is uke :)

I've been reading this for a while, had to catch up with all that was written. I finally got to the end and was like, NO, there must be more! but there wasn't.... Anyway, I love your story. you do the characters so well! I love it so much. hmm, helpful comments? I really can't think of anything that i don't like. I mean, i do feel like i'm being teased every chapter, but that's part of the fun. the characters are done well, your style is very nice, i haven't found any distracting errors, your plot and problems move very smoothly and not unnatural at all. it's just overall very good. Please email me with and update if it wouldn't be too much trouble. THanks

OMG I HAVE MISSED YOU! (look what you have done! You have turn a very very lame fan, into SUPERPOWER FAN!) BUT STILL I WOULD LIKE TO YOU TO UPDATE MORE QUICKLY SO THAT I CAN READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT AND I DON'T HAVE TO BUY A NEW SCREEN, CAUSE THE ANOTHER ONE WAS DESTROYED BY BLOOD AND DROOL... *w*

Transition chapter? My ass... Even your "transition" chapters are more than enjoyable. Didn't know what else to say because there isn't one thing I dislike. Okay, you could double the length but if you were going to do so I would propose the same again and again.

I'm longing for more so please give us more of your stuff :)
Nathaniel

Ok, I should have done this a while ago, I love your work. This story has made me so happy its stupid. I look forward to reading it and love it when you up date. I know sometimes it must be hard to keep going or you want someone to really give you some good feed back. Well just know that I love what you write and I am always looking forward to your next post. I hope in some small way that makes you feel more enthusiastic about your writing.

Peace
Chris

ah, no! I hope you find some insperation soon! I love this story so much, and as sad as it is, it makes my day when I find out that you've updated!!!!

so please update soon!

WRITE MORE!!! Sorry, i will actually attempt to be constructive now. Well you certainly have a VERY nice handle on "romantic moments" - seriously. I love how you can describe exactly what's going on without overkilling the moment. I always get these perfect mental pictures in my mind which is really . . . uhhh . . . nice . . . . I'm bad! I do look forward, very much, to seeing some more "action" soon. Umm . . . I really don't have any complaints about it. I just want to know WHAT HAPPENS! Okay, you probably already have this all worked out in your mind, but for what it's worth, I think Naruto and Sasuke should get together (obviously), I have always been a BIG fan of Tenten with Neji so i was thrilled to see her in this story, and Gaara . . . i have to be honest - i don't like Gaara so you can do whatever you want to him (i'm a horrible person!). But even with the "minor" characters (Neji, Tenten, Gaara, etc.) it would still be nice to get to see what happens to them. you know . . . what they "do" after they realize Naruto is Sasuke's. well that's about it for now. I know this may sound silly but if you ever need any help just let me know ok? I know I have been using atrocious spelling, punctuation, capitalization, grammer, etc. but I actually can write and do some writing myself so if you want . . . i dunno . . . i guess i could look it over or something. I can also draw ok so if you want a certain scene/pic i could sure try! all i'm trying to say is if you need something you can ask me and i'll do my best to help, okay? man that came out weird! oh well! keep up the amazing work! we all love you for it! (GO SASUKE!)(AND NEJI - but for tenten...not...naruto...)(GO FOR IT SASUKE!!!)

Nuu, sniff, i would have reviewed sooner but i was without internet for a week or so o_O i'll try to avoid lazyness ;D Veeery delighted to have the new chapter to read though!!!! Eee! It's sad that i can't last long without fanfics to feed me...O_O Especially this one..gaaah the tension is just getting better and better! Kyaaa~~!! It's the kind of fic that feeds my brain even when i'm not reading it....*replays tasty sasunaru fic snippets throughout the day*...@___@;; And now with Naruto and Sasuke teasing each other all the time since they've become better friends...makes me happyyyyyy! And that kiss!!!!!!!!! eeexcellent...Mwahaha, Naruto, you can't escape now!! You've been ensnared by Sasuke's tastyness! XDDDDD *happydance* Really really looking forward to the next chapter, hopefully you will find motivation to write it!! *^^* I will also try to be diligent with reviewing (bluthering about my addiction...), if that helps in any way O__O;; *bows and scrapes* (ooo, i sent my friend the linky to this fic and she also really loves it!!...hmm...i wonder if she knows there is a new chapter!!! X3) Thanks again for the update!!

^^; I'm usually too lazy to review (ironic, seeing as how I'm a review whore myself), but I wanted to at least remember to do so now. I love this story to pieces, it's honestly one of the few fan fictions I read anymore. It's funny but also developes a pretty interesting plot at the same time. Very well written too. ^^;; One of my favorite Naruto fan fiction quotes come from this, and I actually use it (and credit you of course) as a signature on y!hosting. Anyway, keep up the good work. <3

if you don't write right now, you will have a very ornery naruto x sasuke fan clawing at your door, fingernails scratching insistently at its surface and there it is do you hear that!?! please write more.